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Does this sound/look okay?

Summer Bride Posted: Mar 28, 2005 07:15 PM+

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Posted: Mar 28, 2005 07:15 PM

Does this sound/look okay?

Hearts and flowers, ribbons and lace,
the look of love upon her face.
A happy heart that’s hard to hide,
this woman is soon to be a bride!

Please join us for a Bridal Shower honoring
Kimberly
June 11, 2005 12:30-5:00
Bella Napoli Restaurant

Please R.S.V.P. by June 1st 631 957-
'Wishing Well'

Am I missing anything?

Scoop Posted: Mar 28, 2005 07:27 PM+

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Posted: Mar 28, 2005 07:27 PM

Re: Does this sound/look okay?

Sounds really good! Maybe put the name of the bride instead of this 'women'. Oh and you could also add who is giving the party.

Scoop Posted: Mar 28, 2005 07:33 PM+

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Posted: Mar 28, 2005 07:33 PM

Re: Does this sound/look okay?

Sorry one more thing. Maybe make the RSVP by the end of May this way if you have to make calls etc... just a suggestion:)

traceyd Posted: Mar 28, 2005 07:37 PM+

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Posted: Mar 28, 2005 07:37 PM

Re: Does this sound/look okay?

I think it sounds great-the only thing I would maybe change would be the woman part as well maybe something like

Hearts and flowers, ribbons and lace,
the look of love upon her face.
A happy heart that’s hard to hide,
and Kimberly is soon to be a bride!

or something to that effect with her name in it-either way it's really cute

LO13LO13 Posted: Mar 28, 2005 08:30 PM+

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Posted: Mar 28, 2005 08:30 PM