POLL about my Message in a bottle placecards- input pls!!

We're doing message in a bottle place cards. Will look something like this...



Which 'thank you' do you like best for the scroll of parchment paper we will have inside each??

#1-
'On this Wedding day of ours we join our hands and hearts.
The journey that has brought us here, begins a fresh new start.

This is the day that we've waited for to celebrate our love.
We begin our lives as husband and wife with blessings from above.

We thank our friends and family for being here with us,
We're honored to share this special day with those who mean so much.

Special thanks to our parents for their devotion, love and care,
For the unconditional love they provide is something we now share.

For those that can not be with us we remember them on this day,
Their love and support surrounds us in each and every way.

On this day we say 'I Do' and kiss as husband and wife,
We celebrate our marriage and our new journey of life.'

OR

#2
'This is the day we vowed our love
before you all and God above.
In future years, we shall recall
the joys you wished us, one and all.
We're grateful for your presence here,
all who came from far and near.
May God bless you is what we pray,
as He has us on our wedding day.'

OR

#3
share your own thank you poem idea!

I think I like #1 better but if you are looking for another idea here is a poem I found:

Precious as a seashell,
Deeper than the sea -
More eternal than the waves,
Our love was meant to be.

Thank you for sharing in our special day!
your names
date

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Posted by melissankurt07

I think I like #1 better but if you are looking for another idea here is a poem I found:

Precious as a seashell,
Deeper than the sea -
More eternal than the waves,
Our love was meant to be.

Thank you for sharing in our special day!
your names
date

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TY! Thats cute! Just might b too short.

I prefer #1. I think it is touching and not too long!! HTH! What a fantastic idea for place cards!!

I chose # 1, by the way I have never seen this message in a bottle idea and I think it is great!! I would love to get one as a placecard!!