Shower invite wording??? Please Help!

Can any of you offer any other bridal shower invitation wording suggestions? So far I have these, but my MOH vetoed #1 as common, and #2 may be a little long for the size invitation I have.

Let's Shower Sarah
with Love and Best Wishes
Just before she becomes
Jim's Mrs.

Date Time
Place
Address

Hosted by Name, Mother of the Bride
Please say 'I Do' by August 12th
Phone

OR

The wedding is planned,
the dresses are bought
So Sarah's Bridal Shower
becomes our next thought.

We're showering her with
Love and Best Wishes
Just before she becomes 'Jim's Mrs.'

Date Time
Place
Address

Hosted by Name, Mother of the Bride
Please say 'I Do' by August 12th
Phone

If you can fit it, I like #2..

Check with the invite person to see if it fits..

Which one do you like best?

I kind of liked #1 - short, sweet, to the point.

I'm not sure about the 'becomes our next thought' verse in #2.....

I am too picky!

I like #1

I agree about the 'next thought' line in #2...its like when will this wedding be over??

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Posted by beautyq115

I like #1

I agree about the 'next thought' line in #2...its like when will this wedding be over??

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LOL - Thanks Kathie Lee!!!

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Posted by NYPDsGirl

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Posted by beautyq115

I like #1

I agree about the 'next thought' line in #2...its like when will this wedding be over??

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LOL - Thanks Kathie Lee!!!

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No problem...love your purse theme by the way...very cute and very YOU

I like #2. It's similar to what I used for my sister...

The weather is perfect, the day will be grand.
The dresses all fit and the wedding is planned.
So, let's come together to honor our friend.
And wish her a lifetime of love that won't end!

Join us for a bridal shower in honor of
BRIDE

DATE
TIME
LOCATION
ADDRESS

HOST(S)