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Calling anyone with poetic talent.....

Mrs_C_in_'07 Posted:

Calling anyone with poetic talent.....

I have absolutly NO poetic talent at all. It's horrible. I've been sitting here for a week trying to come up with a cute little poem to put with the MOH/BM totes that mentiones each of the things in there. Any help would be great

Here are the items:

~Old navy tote bag

~Silver trinket box from Things Remembered

~Pair of Flip Flops for the reception or Old Westbury Gardens

~A little book of saying about being a Bridesmaid
~(For my MOH a book of saying about being best friends)

~A diamond circle of life necklace for the bridesmaids
~A diamond 'Jouney' necklace for my maid of honor

I want to incorporate the meaning of the necklaces into the poem somehow.....Circle of Life - A symbol of infinity .... never ending friendship
'Journey' necklace - A celebration of love/friendship, the journey collection symbolizes relationships changing and growing.

Please help me!!! I'll take anything!!! Thanks so much!!
HamptonsBride Posted:

Re: Calling anyone with poetic talent.....

Ok here's what i have so far...i apologize if it sounds corny

In this bag are many things,
some shoes for your feet
and a box for your things.

A book of sayings about standing by my side,
on the day that i will become a bride.

-- A necklace to wear that shows I care,
an endless circle like the friendship we share.

-- A necklace to wear that shows I care,
a celebration of love and friendship we share.
Mrs_C_in_'07 Posted:

Re: Calling anyone with poetic talent.....


Posted by HamptonsBride

Ok here's what i have so far...i apologize if it sounds corny

In this bag are many things,
some shoes for your feet
and a box for your things.

A book of sayings about standing by my side,
on the day that i will become a bride.

-- A necklace to wear that shows I care,
an endless circle like the friendship we share.

-- A necklace to wear that shows I care,
a celebration of love and friendship we share.



I like it!!! thanks so much for your help!!!
kns11 Posted:

Re: Calling anyone with poetic talent.....


Posted by HamptonsBride

Ok here's what i have so far...i apologize if it sounds corny

In this bag are many things,
some shoes for your feet
and a box for your things.

A book of sayings about standing by my side,
on the day that i will become a bride.

-- A necklace to wear that shows I care,
an endless circle like the friendship we share.

-- A necklace to wear that shows I care,
a celebration of love and friendship we share.



Kathryn not corny at all so very sweet!!!!

If I was the receiver I would be touched with the thoughts, meanings, and energy invested.
Feel like helping me out?

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