Any english teachers, editors, writers, etc wana help me with my personal statement!

I'm switching law schools for (financial and personal) reasons and have to submit a personal statement all over again, while im not bad at writing, i just dont know how to put the finishing touches on my essay. If anyone wants to read my law school personal statement and help me with grammer, edits, and etc i would appreciate it greatly!!... i wanted to use essayedge.com but the reviews about it from real ppl that have used it arent that positive.

pleasee FM me