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How does this sound?
LauraPete Posted: Nov 19, 2004 08:59 PM+
LauraPete MEMBER SINCE: 2/03 TOTAL POSTS : 922 WEDDING DATE: Jul 23, 2004
Posted: Nov 19, 2004 08:59 PM bride-minus.png

How does this sound?

for a thank you card?

'We are so happy that you were able to share our special day with us. Your warm thoughts and wonderfully generous gift are truly appreciated. Please accept our sincerest thank you for helping us celebrate the beginning of our new life together.'

Is this too long or too short? Too wordy? I want it to sound sincere.

Are you supposed to list the gift received?
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sophie78 Posted: Nov 19, 2004 11:45 PM+
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Posted: Nov 19, 2004 11:45 PM bride-minus.png

Re: How does this sound?

I think it sounds great!
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Jax430 Posted: Nov 20, 2004 12:30 AM+
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Re: How does this sound?

It sounds good. I usually mention the specific gift if it's anything but money. 'Thank you for the lovely wedding present. The vase will look beautiful in our new home.' (or something similar) A lot of ours were pretty generic though!
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MayDay16 Posted: Nov 21, 2004 08:33 PM+
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Posted: Nov 21, 2004 08:33 PM bride-minus.png

Re: How does this sound?

Sounds nice, I also included anything funny or specific the guest did at the wedding. I saw you dancing to JLo, so glad you had a great time!
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janwinterbridejoy Posted: Nov 21, 2004 08:34 PM+
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Re: How does this sound?

i think its great but i also personalized it a lil and mentioned how berautiful the persons dress was or how great they looked dancing etc
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SomedayBride Posted: Nov 21, 2004 08:39 PM+
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Posted: Nov 21, 2004 08:39 PM bride-minus.png

Re: How does this sound?

It sounds good, but we tried to add something personal to each note. You're hand writing this right? I'm not a fan of pre printed thank yous.
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cindy_bride Posted: Nov 22, 2004 01:41 PM+
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Posted: Nov 22, 2004 01:41 PM bride-minus.png

Re: How does this sound?

I THINK IT SOUNDS GOOD...HMMMM, MAYBE A LITTLE TOO WORDY THOUGH. BUT THATS JUST ME.
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