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ANOTHER UPDATE -- SOMEONE WRITE MY INVITES! haha

SoontobeMrs.Brown Posted:

ANOTHER UPDATE -- SOMEONE WRITE MY INVITES! haha

Okay I hate the wording --- i agree its too casual .. .someone please change my wording to a more formal invite ..


invite you to share in their joy
as they exchange marriage vows on

September third, two thousand and ten


six o'clock in the evening Flowerfield
199 Mills Pond Road St. James, NY



AngnShaun Posted:

Re: Invites ---

Only the first letter, where ever it was necessary is in Caps

JAAMS Posted:

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Posted by AngnShaun

Only the first letter, where ever it was necessary is in Caps



ditto
AwaitingAugust Posted:

Re: Invites ---


Posted by JAAMS


Posted by AngnShaun

Only the first letter, where ever it was necessary is in Caps



ditto



mine too ... i'm not a fan of all-caps - that means you're yelling lol
Lsorrent Posted:

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Posted by AngnShaun

Only the first letter, where ever it was necessary is in Caps



Same here
AngnShaun Posted:

Re: Invites --- UPDATE with wording ---

no... dont caps the first letter of every word...

ETA: Look at my invite and laura's they are in our albums...
jmgoncal Posted:

Re: Invites --- UPDATE with wording ---

I don't have all caps - only the proper nouns are capitalized.

brittndave Posted:

Re: Invites --- UPDATE with wording ---

are you doing very casual invites? i just ask bc the wording sounds veryyyy casual and actually a little weird to me.

but, no it should be (i hope you don't mind i changed it around a little bit):

invite you to share in their joy
as they exchange marriage vows

Friday, the third of September
two thousand and ten
at six o'clock in the evening

Flowerfield
199 Mills Pond Road
St. James, New York
SoontobeMrs.Brown Posted:

Re: Invites --- ANOTHER UPDATE ---


Posted by brittndave

are you doing very casual invites? i just ask bc the wording sounds veryyyy casual and actually a little weird to me.

but, no it should be (i hope you don't mind i changed it around a little bit):

invite you to share in their joy
as they exchange marriage vows

Friday, the third of September
two thousand and ten
at six o'clock in the evening

Flowerfield
199 Mills Pond Road
St. James, New York




No .. not casual .. I wanted more formal .. AHHH!! Please rewrite them for me!!!


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