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Any errors???

bettybcafe Posted:

Any errors???

Ok..Imma go print ou tmy invites now..please proof read it and let me know if I should change anything.

thanks girls...editied for privacy
PapayaChic Posted:

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no zip code on the wedding invite
lisalisa27 Posted:

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You don't need your last name because it is mentioned with your parents.

PapayaChic Posted:

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and spell out New York

PapayaChic Posted:

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Posted by lisalisa27

You don't need your last name because it is mentioned with your parents.



ditoo
you dont need them
but you can still have them
do you two have middle names?
lisalisa27 Posted:

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Also when you use half past drop the O'Clock it should read half past____in the afternoon.

lisalisa27 Posted:

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Posted by Jess5790


Posted by lisalisa27

You don't need your last name because it is mentioned with your parents.



ditoo
you dont need them
but you can still have them
do you two have middle names?



You really shouldn't have them though unless you want. Im looking at my wedding book with invite samples and they are not there on any of them.

bettybcafe Posted:

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Posted by Jess5790

no zip code on the wedding invite

really? Ive never heard of that.
MrsQ-in2007 Posted:

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Posted by bettybcafe

Ok..Imma go print ou tmy invites now..please proof read it and let me know if I should change anything.

Mr. and Mrs. BRIDE PARENTS
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter

BRIDE FIRST NAME

to

GROOM FIRST NAME

son of Mr. and Mrs. GROOM PARENTS
Saturday, the fourteenth of July
Two thousand and seven
at half past TIME o’clock in the afternoon

RECEPTION HALL NAME
ADDRESS Ave
CITY, NY ZIP



Technically you do not have to put your last name and your FH's last name because you both have the same last name as your parents. Here's what I would do:

Mr. and Mrs. BRIDE PARENTS
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter

BRIDE FIRST NAME

to

GROOM FIRST NAME

son of Mr. and Mrs. GROOM PARENTS
Saturday, the fourteenth of July
Two thousand and seven (personally I'd take out the 'and' but that's personal preference
at half past TIME o’clock in the afternoon

RECEPTION HALL NAME
ADDRESS Avenue
CITY, New York ZIP


lisalisa27 Posted:

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Posted by MrsQ-in2007


Posted by bettybcafe

Ok..Imma go print ou tmy invites now..please proof read it and let me know if I should change anything.




Always include year.
MeNBobs Posted:

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you don't need the and in the year. It should be written Two Thousand Seven

lisalisa27 Posted:

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Posted by bettybcafe


Posted by Jess5790

no zip code on the wedding invite

really? Ive never heard of that.



Yes no zip code on invite
lisalisa27 Posted:

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Is your reception at the hall also. If so put reception immediately following. You don't need receptions card if you are having everything at one place.

bettybcafe Posted:

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Thank you!
MrsQ-in2007 Posted:

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Posted by lisalisa27


Posted by MrsQ-in2007

Technically you do not have to put your last name and your FH's last name because you both have the same last name as your parents. Here's what I would do:

Mr. and Mrs. BRIDE PARENTS
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter

BRIDE FIRST NAME

to

GROOM FIRST NAME

son of Mr. and Mrs. GROOM PARENTS
Saturday, the fourteenth of July
Two thousand and seven
at half past TIME o’clock in the afternoon

RECEPTION HALL NAME
ADDRESS Ave
CITY, NY ZIP




Always include year.



yep, the year MUST be on it, but the 'and' doesn't have to be there (I would put 'Two thousand seven')
PapayaChic Posted:

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Posted by bettybcafe


Posted by Jess5790

no zip code on the wedding invite

really? Ive never heard of that.



yup def no zip code

search at other LIWers invite proofs
none have the zipcode
lisalisa27 Posted:

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Posted by MeNBobs

you don't need the and in the year. It should be written Two Thousand Seven



I guess that would be a def personal preference I would put and in my opinion it looks better.

Also I have always seen and in all the wedding books with examples of invites. Also my proofreader for my invites kept that in mine.

So it is a personal preference.
bettybcafe Posted:

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Posted by Jess5790


Posted by bettybcafe


Posted by Jess5790

no zip code on the wedding invite

really? Ive never heard of that.



yup def no zip code

search at other LIWers invite proofs
none have the zipcode

I just looked in my catolouge of invites..ur right
MrsQ-in2007 Posted:

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Posted by lisalisa27

Is your reception at the hall also. If so put reception immediately following. You don't need receptions card if you are having everything at one place.



Actually this is a great point! If ceremony and location are at the same place, I would do:

Mr. and Mrs. BRIDE PARENTS
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter

BRIDE FIRST NAME

to

GROOM FIRST NAME

son of Mr. and Mrs. GROOM PARENTS
Saturday, the fourteenth of July
Two thousand seven (no 'AND' but if you want it, you can leave it)
at half past TIME o’clock in the afternoon

RECEPTION HALL NAME
ADDRESS Ave
CITY, New York (Spell out everything and leave out zip)


Reception Immediately Following
brady37 Posted:

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If you want to include the accent mark over the 'e' in Jose ... if you are using Word, you hold down the ' key and control at the same time, let go and hit type 'e.' But it looks fine the way it is!

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