Anyone feeling creative? Need help with wording for ....
PreshusSmurf
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our adults only rehearsal dinner ...
we're not actually rehearsing, so we had planned on calling it a 'welcome dinner'
the wording can be cute, but it doesn't have to be!
this is just to put with the save the dates (we are sending a little packet), not the actual invitaitons ... just looking for like 1 line to explain what we have planned ... something like this:
Friday, November 9th WELCOME DINNER Join the Adults for Dinner and Drinks as we Roast the Bride and Groom on the Eve of their Wedding Details to Follow
Any ideas?!!
Note: Edited to fix spelling!
PreshusSmurf
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Something else I just thought of .... is this better? Or is it too cutesy?
Friday, November 9th Welcome Dinner A chance for the adults to mix and mingle and roast the bride and groom on their last evening of being single Details to follow
LT708
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I really like the second one!! I don't think its too cutesy
PreshusSmurf
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Thanks!
beachbum05
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put 'soon' after details to follow! Then it will rhyme!
PreshusSmurf
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Posted by beachbum05
put 'soon' after details to follow! Then it will rhyme!
That's a good idea! Thanks!!!
Jkiesel
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I was just wondering if one line was supposed to be 'toast to the bride and groom' or was the word 'roast' put there purposely? I luv it though.
PreshusSmurf
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Oh, I know! No worries!
Does this sound better (so people don't think I had a typo)?
Friday, November 9th Welcome Dinner A chance for the adults to mix and mingle to toast and roast the bride and groom on their last evening of being single Details to follow soon
FutureMrsSabbagh
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I like the 2nd one as well, it flows really well
Lizards
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I would add 'Look for' before 'details to follow soon'; that way the meter follows the rhyme- otherwise I think it's PERFECT!
PreshusSmurf
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You girls are awesome!!! I just read it to FH and he likes it! Yippeeeee
PreshusSmurf
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You girls are the greatest! We tweaked a word or two, and I wanted to share the final version we came up with:
Welcome Dinner Friday, November 9th
A chance for the adults to mix and mingle to toast and roast the Bride and Groom and celebrate their last evening of being single Look for details to follow soon
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Posted by PreshusSmurf
You girls are the greatest! We tweaked a word or two, and I wanted to share the final version we came up with:
Welcome Dinner Friday, November 9th
A chance for the adults to mix and mingle to toast and roast the Bride and Groom and celebrate their last evening of being single Look for details to follow soon
to roast the bride and groom? i don't get it
Lizards
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Posted by hayleyandsteve
to roast the bride and groom? i don't get it
A 'roast' is an event attended by close friends/colleagues. It provides an opportunity for guests to poke fun at- or tell anecdotes about the roastee- in this case- the b&g
