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Are either of these ok?

Original post by sugarnspice

Life is not measured
by the number of breaths
you take, but by moments that
take your breath away
We ask you to join us
as our daughter
Megan Grace
gives her hand in marriage
to
Mark Steven Simons
Saturday, October 18, 2014
at 7:00 p.m.
on Clearwater Beach, Pier 21
Clearwater Beach, Florida


A new life has its start,
They'll share with each other
one love, one dream, one heart
We request the honor of your
presence at the marriage of
our daughter
Stephanie Teresa Bolter
to
Jacob Louis Jackson
on Friday, the second of May
two thousand fourteen
at two o'clock in the afternoon
The Belmor Mansion
Cassie15 Posted:

Re: Are either of these ok?

I love the 2nd one, it sounds more natural. The 1st one sounds a bit like a movie, lol.

oktropical Posted:

Re: Are either of these ok?

I really like #1

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