Bridesmaid newsletter help! (UPDATED with PICS)

Soon2BMrsD Posted: Jun 09, 2007 06:22 PM

Bridesmaid newsletter help! (UPDATED with PICS)

Hey girls i made my news letter with Melissa (dancinmyazoff) as a template (hope you dont mind it just came out GREAT!)

but i feel like its missing something i would really like some corrective criticism! Thanks girls !

Front

Back

jgl Posted: Jun 09, 2007 06:28 PM

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post it lady!

Soon2BMrsD Posted: Jun 09, 2007 06:36 PM

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sorry having pic problems.

Soon2BMrsD Posted: Jun 09, 2007 07:11 PM

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anyone?

jgl Posted: Jun 09, 2007 07:12 PM

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nice job

i noticed...

** pink, flowers - remove the comma after pink

**beach andshell theme (space between the and & shell

** 'as far as dresses go... ' i would reword..
EX: The hunt for bridesmaids dresses has been eventful, but one has been found that we all love

something like that maybe...

Soon2BMrsD Posted: Jun 09, 2007 07:13 PM

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Posted by jgl

nice job

i noticed...

pink, flowers

remove the comma after pink

thanks i didnt even see it!

jgl Posted: Jun 09, 2007 07:15 PM

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instead of on contacts..

ME : i would change to Bride (hehe) or Megan

jgl Posted: Jun 09, 2007 07:19 PM

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what about this... or soemthing like this...

I have decided to go with a beach themed wedding. To keep with the theme the bridesmaids dresses will be torqouise and the flowers will be pink. The groomsman will be wearing the traditional black tux.

Soon2BMrsD Posted: Jun 09, 2007 07:20 PM

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Posted by jgl

what about this... or soemthing like this...

I have decided to go with a beach themed wedding. To keep with the theme the bridesmaids dresses will be torqouise and the flowers will be pink. The groomsman will be wearing the traditional black tux.

sounds great!! thanks!!

jgl Posted: Jun 09, 2007 07:24 PM

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you are welcome.. other than what i saw.. i love the layout and the colors! it looks great!!

i just cant read the heart shape so just double check for errors =-)

Soon2BMrsD Posted: Jun 09, 2007 07:38 PM

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Posted by jgl

you are welcome.. other than what i saw.. i love the layout and the colors! it looks great!!

i just cant read the heart shape so just double check for errors =-)

i just re did the heart shaped thing... let me see if i can post!

ChristineAaron08 Posted: Jun 09, 2007 07:53 PM

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Very cute. I love your theme too. Melissa has inspire me to make one too (b/c her's was so awesome). Mine is a bit different though b/c I have a few out of town girls. I also have a timeline for the day of hair and photos, etc. Your girls are gonna LOVE it. Awesome job!