Need some help with our STD wording!!! This is what I have so far...
By now you’ve heard Nicki and Josh are engaged It’s been a few months And plans have been made The place has been booked The date is all set We hope you will join us On the day we’ll be wed
Can't figure out the set/wed thing!!
Help???
DebMaher
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Wonderful times await since Nicki and Josh are engaged And for several months Wedding plans are being made The hall has been set Vows will be said We hope you will join us On the day we’ll be wed
How's this? I can do better - this was a quickie!
Moosey911
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Oh my....now I have to choose between poems also!!! Such decisions!!!!
marymoon
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My only comment is that I don't like the phrase 'the place has been booked'. best of luck
Robinella
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I think both poems are great! cant lose with whichever one you pick!
halfpintny
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Ok...I haven't had my coffee yet but here goes:
By now you’ve heard Nicki and Josh are engaged Over the next few months Lots of plans will be made Lands End is the place it will be and October 9, 2005 is the day that we’ll be married Mark this day down No need to wait We hope you will join us So please save the date
too corny?
Bride2005
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By now you’ve heard, Nicki and Josh are engaged.
Over the next few months, Lots of plans will be made.
Lands End is the place October 9, 2005 is the date
Mark it down right away, No need to wait.
We hope you will join us, So please save the date!
AJsMommy122
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By now you’ve heard Nicki and Josh are engaged It’s been a few months And plans are being made We are so excited and just cant wait We hope you will join us On this very special date!
Oct 9, 2005 Please save the date!
Moosey911
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oh goodness....you girls are great!!! Thanks SO much!!! gotta show them all to FH and see what he thinks.
