can someone proofread my invite

the top is cut off bc the sample size is 5 1/8 x 7 1/8

my really invite will be over an inch longer
5 1/8 x 8.5

1. i know when you put both parents on top its usually 'and', but i really liked 'together with'

2. i know you dont need anthonys full name but since hes older, i think it looks manly. This is how ive seen it done in a few weddings. lolol

any mistakes, criticisms, etc....
i want to order them this week so i can start on the DIY part of the invites







my rsvp card

I like the wording, and the font is great, is it swash caps bickham? lol! I used that one for my invites...Ok, first, the together with is fine in my opinion, but I think that perhap there are too many names being mentioned, for example you have it in the format of Mr and Mrs John and mary smith, perhaps it would be better to just state Mr. and Mrs John Smith and ...

Second, when you name your FH, you list him in the format of Mr. John Tom Smith, and you then only put your name with no miss, I think that you should only list FH first middle and last name and then follow suite with your name.

Other than that, I think the invite is great

I think the text is perfect and i especially love the opening lines above. Very pretty

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Posted by MimiMcG

I like the wording, and the font is great, is it swash caps bickham? lol! I used that one for my invites...Ok, first, the together with is fine in my opinion, but I think that perhap there are too many names being mentioned, for example you have it in the format of Mr and Mrs John and mary smith, perhaps it would be better to just state Mr. and Mrs John Smith and ...

Second, when you name your FH, you list him in the format of Mr. John Tom Smith, and you then only put your name with no miss, I think that you should only list FH first middle and last name and then follow suite with your name.

Other than that, I think the invite is great

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Thats a good point. I totally missed that! Your name has no Ms. or Miss. but your FH does have Mr. in front of it.

I think it looks great. I would change one thing though... I know you want to put your FH's full name, but to be honest, it looks strange if you only put your first and middle name... especially if it says 'Mr.' at the beginning of his name.

I would change it so that it says

.. at the marriage of their children

Jessica Stephanie Yxxxxxxx
to (or and)
FH first middle last

That way it has his full name, but the format flows. The way you have it, it makes your name seem much less important than his name, so that's why I recommend the change.