Can you all please proof read my invites and inserts!!

INVITE F.Y.I I took out our last names

TWO LIVES, TWO HEARTS
JOINED TOGETHER IN FRIENDSHIP
UNITED TOGETHER IN LOVE

Catherine Joan ______
DAUGHTER OF DANIEL & JOAN _____

&
Christopher Alex _____
SON OF ALEXE & MARIANA _____

REQUEST THE HONOUR OF YOUR PRESENCE
AS THEY EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS AND
BEGIN THEIR NEW LIFE TOGETHER

ON SATURDAY, THE TWENTIETH OF DECEMBER
TWO THOUSAND AND EIGHT
AT THREE O’CLOCK IN THE AFTERNOON

Saint Joseph’s Parish
39 NORTH CARLL AVENUE
BABYLON, NEW YORK 11702


INSERTS
R.S.V.P

The favour of your reply is requested on or before
November 10, 2008

M_______________________________
___ Seats have been reserved in your honour

____ Accepts with pleasure
___ Will attend
____ Declines with regret

__________________________________
RECEPTION

Please join us for a night of dinner, drinks and dancing beginning at seven thirty in the evening

Jericho Terrace
249 Jericho Turnpike
Mineola, NY 11501

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ACCOMMODATIONS
Rooms have been reserved for you at

La Quinta Inn & Suites

At the rate of $159 plus tax
This special rate will be
available until 11/19/2008

For reservations please call
516.705.9000
Please specify you are reserving
a room under the
Barclay-Florea reservation

La Quinta Inn & Suites
821 Stewart Avenue
Garden City, NY 11530



THANKS!!!!!!!

Honour is misspelled in your RSVP, you just need to switch around the U.

You have ___ will attend under Accepts with pleasure. I understand you're asking for a number but it's confusingly worded, like you're just asking again if they're coming. Maybe put Number Attending?

Other than that looks great!

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Posted by cbcf




M_______________________________
___ Seats have been reserved in your hounor

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Should be honour ... not hounor

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Posted by missliss

Honour is misspelled in your RSVP, you just need to switch around the U.

You have ___ will attend under Accepts with pleasure. I understand you're asking for a number but it's confusingly worded, like you're just asking again if they're coming. Maybe put Number Attending?

Other than that looks great!

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opps thanks i didn't realize i spelt that wrong!

and i completely understand about the ___will attend i will switch that around so it isn't as confusing haha looking at it now it definitely is!! thanks!

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Posted by Maria31

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Posted by cbcf




M_______________________________
___ Seats have been reserved in your hounor

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Should be honour ... not hounor

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thank you

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Posted by kristin597

They look good. The only thing I can think of, and I don't even know if I'm right, but for some reason I keep thinking its 'The favour' instead of 'A favour' in the rsvp.

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oh no i think you are right that actually does sound better as well
thanks!!!

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INSERTS
R.S.V.P

A favour of your reply is requested on or before
November 10, 2008

M_______________________________
___ Seats have been reserved in your honour

____ Accepts with pleasure
___ Will attend
____ Declines with regret

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the will attend is confusing i think you'll need to reword it maybe

___ Attending?

or you can just take out the will attend..
I didnt have it on my response card and I was fine
people that wanted to bring a guest or a family member they just wrote that persons name on the top with theirs. if that makes sense

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Posted by yelley77

should I bring my paper-cutter home this weekend?

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um...actually i had to order new paper from paperandmore for the inserts.

i have all the invites actually cut and printed out already (i just posted it here to triple check that i spelt everything right!!) i had my mom and dad both spell check the invites before i printed but wanted to make sure again haha

yeah so i can't actually print the inserts yet until i get the paper. which probably wont be till mon or tues

but thank you lovie!!!!!!!!

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Posted by hannahshim

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INSERTS
R.S.V.P

A favour of your reply is requested on or before
November 10, 2008

M_______________________________
___ Seats have been reserved in your honour

____ Accepts with pleasure
___ Will attend
____ Declines with regret

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the will attend is confusing i think you'll need to reword it maybe

___ Attending?

or you can just take out the will attend..
I didnt have it on my response card and I was fine
people that wanted to bring a guest or a family member they just wrote that persons name on the top with theirs. if that makes sense

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thank you!!!! actually alissa suggested putting ____number attending so i think i might do that. i am just nervous because i know my family and i know they will think they can bring more people so thats why i put ___ seats reserved in your honour lolol

On the hotel accommodations I would put a group of rooms have been blocked for you

not a room has been reserverd for you -- people may think you booked and are paying for their room!

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Posted by cbcf

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Posted by missliss

Honour is misspelled in your RSVP, you just need to switch around the U.

You have ___ will attend under Accepts with pleasure. I understand you're asking for a number but it's confusingly worded, like you're just asking again if they're coming. Maybe put Number Attending?

Other than that looks great!

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opps thanks i didn't realize i spelt that wrong!

and i completely understand about the ___will attend i will switch that around so it isn't as confusing haha looking at it now it definitely is!! thanks!

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I agree with the number attending.

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Posted by anneandchris

On the hotel accommodations I would put a group of rooms have been blocked for you

not a room has been reserverd for you -- people may think you booked and are paying for their room!

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oh thanks smart idea anne!!!

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Posted by anneandchris

On the hotel accommodations I would put a group of rooms have been blocked for you

not a room has been reserverd for you -- people may think you booked and are paying for their room!

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Great idea!

Also - I think you should put Church of St Joseph - not St Joe's Parish...

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Posted by cbcf

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Posted by kristin597

They look good. The only thing I can think of, and I don't even know if I'm right, but for some reason I keep thinking its 'The favour' instead of 'A favour' in the rsvp.

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oh no i think you are right that actually does sound better as well
thanks!!!

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No problem! I proofread mine 2x and didnt realize they had my address wrong until FH pointed it out!

I love the way this invitation is written.

I think everybody else already pointed out anything that would need correction, so I'll just say GOOD JOB!