Can you guys help me proof my inserts?

Ok, this is the first draft. My friend has to add the names of the cards on top (directions, reception, accomodation, rsvp) and there is a garden city typo on the accommodation card. Aside from that do you see anything else? notice anything else? Do you have better wording for the recption card?

Here they are:

They are beautiful but one thing
You listed the hotel name twice and the city is next to the address (take that out)
Maybe put the address under the hotel name.

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Posted by mariaobride

i love them don't know if it is me but on your hotel accomodation you may want to space the address 821 from the word city

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That is the typo. that garden city shouldn't be there

danielle, they're so pretty!!! just wondering, do you really need the reception card since it's all happening at the same place? usually on the invite it says reception immediately following cereomony, or something to that affect.

also, a space is needed between city and 821 on the hotel card.

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Posted by mariaobride

i love them don't know if it is me but on your hotel accomodation you may want to space the address 821 from the word city

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I agree! Looks very good, you may just need the space! Good job!!!

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Posted by yelley77

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Posted by mariaobride

i love them don't know if it is me but on your hotel accomodation you may want to space the address 821 from the word city

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That is the typo. that garden city shouldn't be there

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duh, and i commented it on it too!! maybe i should read the entire post before reading the invite!

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Posted by yelley77

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Posted by mariaobride

i love them don't know if it is me but on your hotel accomodation you may want to space the address 821 from the word city

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That is the typo. that garden city shouldn't be there

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oh i see okay.......

nevermind im stupid

ETA: i really doubt its like that but i agree that you dont need a reception card

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Posted by teenigrrl

danielle, they're so pretty!!! just wondering, do you really need the reception card since it's all happening at the same place? usually on the invite it says reception immediately following cereomony, or something to that affect.

also, a space is needed between city and 821 on the hotel card.

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I was thinking the same thing about the reception card--especially with following and followed by, it seems like too much following! We just did Cocktails, dinner and dancing to make it simpler (since people know dinner and dancing is after the cocktail hour)...

i think i'm ditching the reception card..,. you girls are right

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Posted by Espo22

nevermind im stupid

ETA: i really doubt its like that but i agree that you dont need a reception card

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on the invite it says, 'reception immediately following' so i'm ditching the reception card, you guys are right, i dont' need it
and each of those are seperate cards, i just couldn't seperate it in the post

I think they are soo pretty! Aside from has been mentioned already, You dont have an RSVP date. Do you not want to put one on there?

Nevermind... that part of the picture didnt show up on my computer the first time

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Posted by yelley77

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Posted by Espo22

nevermind im stupid

ETA: i really doubt its like that but i agree that you dont need a reception card

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on the invite it says, 'reception immediately following' so i'm ditching the reception card, you guys are right, i dont' need it
and each of those are seperate cards, i just couldn't seperate it in the post

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yeah dont mind im retarded hahahaha. Yeah i think if its on the invite its more than perfect

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Posted by cherish83

I think they are soo pretty! Aside from has been mentioned already, You dont have an RSVP date. Do you not want to put one on there?

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She does, it says Kindly RSVP by August 14 on the bottom

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Posted by Snick n Nick

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Posted by cherish83

I think they are soo pretty! Aside from has been mentioned already, You dont have an RSVP date. Do you not want to put one on there?

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She does, it says Kindly RSVP by August 14 on the bottom

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I know, I noticed that. That part of the picture didnt show up for me for some reason, the first time

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Posted by cherish83

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Posted by Snick n Nick

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Posted by cherish83

I think they are soo pretty! Aside from has been mentioned already, You dont have an RSVP date. Do you not want to put one on there?

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She does, it says Kindly RSVP by August 14 on the bottom

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I know, I noticed that. That part of the picture didnt show up for me for some reason, the first time

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lol, can you imagine if i didn't put an rsvp date? hahahah

Danielle he really is doing a great job on them!!!! They look awesome! I love it.


can he do mine