hey guys can u just tell me if this all looks right?
Looks great, Jess!
beachbum05
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I'd put a colon after 'please call'
But thats nit-picky It's fine the way it is! Good job!
mrspalomino148
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that looks great! ... but do you know how much the other hotel is? just so they know the difference
jgl
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i think i would put the hotel that you ARE using in bigger print and the alternative smaller
other than that looks great!!!
beachbum05
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Posted by jgl
i think i would put the hotel that you ARE using in bigger print and the alternative smaller
other than that looks great!!!
Good call
MikeandJess
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that looks great jess, did you do those yourself?
bemyyoko
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I think it's great but I might change a few things to avoid confusion. You have it saying 'a room has been Reserved for you'
People might get confused about whether or not they have to pay for it or whatever. I'm only saying it b/c i know some of my friends or older family members would be.
I would also include the room rate at the alternate hotel as well so that they can make an educated decision.
Are you blocking off rooms there too or no?
ant n tilde
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i think it looks great but maybe you can mention WHEN the room will be let go? 30 days before?
Snowflake08
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looks great
Kimbalina
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Love it.... FH said to steal it for us to use!
kristi313
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i think it looks good but i also agree that you should definitely include the rate of the alternative hotel just as a courtesy
