I can't post the PDF with the pretty fonts, but Jennifer from Tying The Knot just sent me a proof of my invite.... can you proof with me please? THANKS!!
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Jennifer Lynn and Robert David together with their parents Mr. and Mrs. Joseph V____ and Mr. and Mrs. Jeffrey T___ request the honour of your presence at their marriage Saturday, the seventh of October Two thousand and six promptly at twelve o’clock in the afternoon The Coral House Baldwin, New York
Reception immediately following
October Bliss
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Looks fine except for the 'and' in two thousand 'and' six. It doesn't belong there. Should read two-thousand six.
evnme
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i agree w/ october bliss
soon2bcopswife
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Also, Honour is for a house of worship, honor is for any other venue.
jenheartsrob
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Is it really? I thought 'honour' was just to make it more formal... So it's bad to use it?
evnme
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i would still use honour
cherryj24
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I used honour.
Oh yeah and i forgot to put reception immediately following. how bad is THAT??
franksgirl323
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yep....the and doesn't belong.
soon2bcopswife
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Posted by jenheartsrob
Is it really? I thought 'honour' was just to make it more formal... So it's bad to use it?
If you are really into etiquette, but I wouldn't care either, I personally like Honour better.
AlmostMrsKelly
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we also used 'honour'
patticakes
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Yes, just the 'and' in the year....Otherwise very nice.
reenielady
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Looks good -I was wondering do you really think you need promptly. If you are worried if people are going to be a little late you could always say 11:45 in the morning.
R&J0806
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JMO, but i think you shouls omit 'promptly.' If your ceremony really does start at noon, i suggest writing 11:45 on the invite.
