Could You Ladies be so kind and proof read my menu...
CloudNine
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Saturday, February 20, 2010
Dinner Combination Course SWEET ONION WAFFLE WITH WARM MOZZARELLA Layered With Prosciutto, Beefsteak Tomato Served With Micro Greens and Basil & Sun-Dried Tomato Oil
Main Course PORCINI DUSTED FILET MIGNON With A Gorgonzola Au Poivre Sauce, White Truffle Mashed Potato and Asparagus OR PEACH AND BOURBON GLAZED CHICKEN Breast of Chicken Over House Made Jalapeno Corn Cake, Fingerling Potatoes and Corn Succotash OR SUCCULENT LOBSTER AND SHRIMP CREPE Served On A Bed Of Sautéed Spinach with A Sherry Cream Sauce Accompanied By Julienne Plum Tomatoes and Asparagus OR GRILLED VEGETABLE LASAGNA Served with Plum Tomato Sauce
Dessert Red Velvet Wedding Cake Served with A Chocolate Dipped Strawberry and A Gourmet Dessert Cart
Gourmet Ice-Cream Sundae Bar
Coffee Service Espresso, Cappuccino and Assorted Cordials Regular And Decaffeinated Coffee Assorted Herbal Tea’s
MrsSoto
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omg, i am realllllly not the one to proofread considering i left the word Road off my directions but i just have to say um....DROOOOOOLLLL. i am so jealous. you have a to die for menu
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great!
on mine i wrote 'entree selections' rather than main course so i didn't have to put 'or' in between each one
unless u want that then its fine
HSsweethearts
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Your menu is making me hungry
Future Mrs H
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I dont see anything wrong with it but........ Droolllllllll Everything sounds so good!!!
Jna2010
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spelling looks good to me... the only thing i would say is use either '&' or 'and' throughout i noticed you used both, and the other thing is i dont think you have to capitalize 'A' as in 'with a steak' or whatever lol
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and I'll take the succulent lobster and shrimp crepe - thanks....
CloudNine
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Posted by StaceYums81
great!
on mine i wrote 'entree selections' rather than main course so i didn't have to put 'or' in between each one
unless u want that then its fine
well i didnt type it up, the woman im using for menus did. she did it that way. i never thought about the format. maybe i will change it so there arent any 'or''s in it. i think i like it better your way
T E R I
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YUUUUUMMMMMMMYYYYYYYY
I can't wait!!!!!!!!
jme78
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The lobster and shrimp crepe at Flowerfield is to die for.
I want it right now. Sorry I am too distracted to read your menu.
Diana508
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I just got hungry. It looks fine though.
CloudNine
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Posted by Jna2010
spelling looks good to me... the only thing i would say is use either '&' or 'and' throughout i noticed you used both, and the other thing is i dont think you have to capitalize 'A' as in 'with a steak' or whatever lol
didn't realize that either - good eye
LoveyDovey
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i would leave out the 'or' and maybe put 'choose one' at the top or 'entree selections'
and the only thing i would change is
'Layered With Prosciutto, Beefsteak Tomato Served With'
TO:
'Layered With Prosciutto & Beefsteak Tomato. Served With'
or
'Layered With Prosciutto, Beefsteak Tomato & Served With'
otherwise sounds great....and delicious!
EJANov2010
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Can I recommend removing the '-' from 'ice-cream'? I know this is a small detail but there is no hyphen in ice cream. I hope this helps!
CloudNine
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Can I recommend removing the '-' from 'ice-cream'? I know this is a small detail but there is no hyphen in ice cream. I hope this helps!
yes thank you!
EJANov2010
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Also, it should read 'herbal teas' not 'herbal tea's'
DaniandKen2010
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Layered With Prosciutto, Beefsteak Tomato Served With Micro Greens and Basil & Sun-Dried Tomato Oil
I would say Micro Greens, Basil & Sun-dried tomato oil.
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Posted by MrsSoto
omg, i am realllllly not the one to proofread considering i left the word Road off my directions but i just have to say um....DROOOOOOLLLL. i am so jealous. you have a to die for menu
i was going to say the same freakin thing
CloudNine
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Posted by MrsSoto
omg, i am realllllly not the one to proofread considering i left the word Road off my directions but i just have to say um....DROOOOOOLLLL. i am so jealous. you have a to die for menu
i was going to say the same freakin thing
aww thanks ladies! food was important to me. i wanted some different things on the menu instead of your basic fish and basic chicken francese
