cute poem

I need help for a friend.

She is getting married and going to Hawaii. Her in laws are paying for the Honeymoon.......they want to showcase it at the shower in a picture frame. The MIL is putting a picture of hawaii in a picture frame and wants a cute saying....

and ideas? something short and cute that rhymes preferably. thanks!

how about:

The day is almost here,
And we can hardly wait
To laugh, and cry, and dance,
As we celebrate.

But when that night is through,
There’s still more fun in store.
because we’re headed to Hawaii
For beaches, leis, and more.

Thank You Mr. and Mrs. Blank
For making our Honeymoon dreams possible!

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Posted by mybabylovesmoi

how about:

The day is almost here,
And we can hardly wait
To laugh, and cry, and dance,
As we celebrate.

But when that night is through,
There’s still more fun in store.
because we’re headed to Hawaii
For beaches, leis, and more.

Thank You Mr. and Mrs. Blank
For making our Honeymoon dreams possible!

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Okay, changed one of the lines a little bit. Prefer this one myself

The day is almost here,
And we can hardly wait.
To laugh, and cry, and dance,
As we celebrate.

But when that night is through,
There’s still more fun in store.
because we’re headed to Hawaii
to its sunny, sandy, shores.

Thank You Mr. and Mrs. Blank
For making our Honeymoon dreams possible!