Dfouble check my invite wording please!

lisagail55 Posted: Apr 02, 2010 07:24 PM

Dfouble check my invite wording please!

Together with their parents
Lisa Gail Kellaher
and
Jason Parisi
request the pleasure of your company
at their marriage
on Friday, the third of September
two thousand and ten
at half past six o’clock
The Vanderbilt Mansion at Dowling
150 Idle Hour Boulevard
Oakdale, New York
Formal reception to immediately follow

Is this right? Like capitalization/punctuation and all?

TIA!

wedding_girl Posted: Apr 02, 2010 07:26 PM

Re: Dfouble check my invite wording please!

you are good

NellieBellie32 Posted: Apr 03, 2010 02:27 PM

Re: Dfouble check my invite wording please!

sounds and looks perfect

KN2011 Posted: Apr 03, 2010 02:41 PM

Re: Dfouble check my invite wording please!

looks good to me

Moonmist09 Posted: Apr 03, 2010 06:38 PM

Re: Dfouble check my invite wording please!

looks perfect, but i've never seen the word 'formal' before reception on an invite. its not necessary, but if you like it, keep it.

Dc1204 Posted: Apr 03, 2010 06:42 PM

Re: Dfouble check my invite wording please!

Looks great!

Jna2010 Posted: Apr 03, 2010 07:13 PM

Re: Dfouble check my invite wording please!

Posted by Moonmist09

looks perfect, but i've never seen the word 'formal' before reception on an invite. its not necessary, but if you like it, keep it.

i agree