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does this look right? invite ?

exotica776 Posted:

does this look right? invite ?


Because you have shared in their lives
with your friendship and love,
Mr. and Mrs. William xxxxx
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter


Marie Christine

TO

Ronald James

Son of Mr. and Mrs. Ronald James xxxxx

Friday, the eleventh day of November
in the year two thousand and Five
at half past three o’clock in the afternoon

Saint Christopher’s Church
Baldwin, New York


there is a bigger space between the top text and my name, than fh's name and the bottom text. also, should there be a space before my parents name.
ex. because you have shared bla blah
(space here)
mr and mrs.
suven Posted:

Re: does this look right? invite ?

I never understood the 'TO' part. We used 'and'. When I read 'to', it makes me think that only the woman is getting married.

jimmysgrl Posted:

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I did the same wording but didn't leave a space after his parents name. Ask your invitation person because for me, it wouldn't have fit.

pinkstar025 Posted:

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i think its fine

M&S Sept12006 Posted:

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I really like it... I love the first part...'Because you have shared in their lives with your friendship and love'...the daughter .... to .... sounds kind of standard but the first part is nice...

exotica776 Posted:

Re: does this look right? invite ?

thanks so much guys!

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