E-party wording

I need some ideas on how to word the invitations to our E party- and who names go first- thanks in advance

for mine i did

The Most Precious Moment of her Life…
Brian asked Melissa to be his wife!

Please join us in celebrating
The engagement of

Melissa last name
And
Brian last name

Saturday, August 9, 2003
12 noon
Il Palazzo di Villa Russo
101-12 Lefferts Boulevard
Richmond Hill, NY

R.S.V.P by August 2, 2003
Julia and Bill
(718) 555-1234

here is what we used:

Dennis popped the question
Jennifer said 'Yes'
Now we are popping a bottle
Please be our guest

Join us as we celebrate
the engagement of
Jennifer and Dennis

Date, Location, RSVP