HELP!! Did I mess up my invitations??

I just ordered my invitations and am now thinking they don't sound right this is how they read...

Jane Laura
and
Jim Michael
together with their parents
Mr. and Mrs. John Doe
and
Mr. and Mrs. Ted Smith
request the honour of your presence
at their marriage
on Sunday, the tenth of October
two thousand and four
at three o'clock in the afternoon
Such and such Church
Smith Avenue
Long Island, New York

help, are they ok, I know it's a little weird but this is how we wanted to phrase it...now I a mthinknig it is all wrong

Mine are much wordier than that. I think they are fine.

We wanted ours similar to yours because we are hosting the wedding.

I guess what I was worried about was does it look weird that I only used our first and middle names not our last and does it sound like our parents are getting married? I think i Am driving myself crazy!!

No it doesn't look like your parents are getting married! LOL. A lot of people word the parents that way when the B&G are hosting the event. Stop reading them over and over again, that why they sound funny to you