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Help - invitation wording

Corduroy94 Posted:

Help - invitation wording

Ok girls - I have till 5pm today to make some decisions on how the heck to word this stuff. Does eveything look ok?

Also, the cocktail hour is at 6. Is starting my ceremony at 3:30 in Bayside too early. My Dad keeps saying 4 is better but I'm worried about running late or traffic since it's Labor Day weekend.

RSVP - Too much wording?

The favour of a reply is requested
by August 1st
Names_____
___Delighted to attend ___ Number attending
___Regretfully decline

Please share a token of advice on the back

Reception - Should it be 'immediately following &time' or just one - not both?

Dinner and Dancing
Immediatly following the ceremony
at six o'clock in the evening
Fox Hollow
123 Lane
Woodbury, NY


Pease ignore my spelling errors - I'm typing insanely fast!! Crazy day at work!

Thanks girls!!
Sweetpea130000 Posted:

Re: Help - invitation wording

if the ceremony is at 3:30 in bayside, and the cocktail hour is at 6, that doesn't sound like immediately following to me.

Corduroy94 Posted:

Re: Help - invitation wording

Thanks!! That's the exact line I kept questioning!
takeoutcook Posted:

Re: Help - invitation wording

I agree, I'd take out 'Immediately following the ceremony.'

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