I still have my Jr.Bridesmaid to ask. I've already asked my flower girl and ring bearer and gave them cards that I made with poems in them. I found this one but am not sure if I like it.
Can anyone make it better? Or, should I just leave it?
A little lady carries flowers and brings a small bouquet She helps us as we celebrate a joyful wedding day She is a princess in her gown A picture come to life She brings such joy in helping us Become man and wife We are glad that she can stand with us So, graceful and so tall and help make this special time The very best of all.
Will you be our Jr.Bridesmaid?
jenniferd
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I think it sounds good the way it is.
cedesnyc
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That is BEAUTIFUL
why change it!!!!!!!! I love it.....leave it alone
HotAir
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A little lady carries flowers and brings a small bouquet
that part annoys me - she carries flowers and brings a small bouquet. Aren't they the same?
stefandken
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i think its great as it is
FuTuRe MrS MaZz
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Posted by HotAir
A little lady carries flowers and brings a small bouquet
that part annoys me - she carries flowers and brings a small bouquet. Aren't they the same?
lol completely agree... im stuck on that too
HotAir
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needs a sentence that ends with something that rhymes with day.
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kgicrls
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I like it...
Mrs B to Be
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A little lady carries flowers and brings a small bouquet
that part annoys me - she carries flowers and brings a small bouquet. Aren't they the same?
how about:
A little lady carries flowers to celebrate this day
