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Help me finish this cellophane poem please!

ef922 Posted:

Help me finish this cellophane poem please!

To have more time to socialize
And visit with the bride-to-be
Wrap your gift in cellophane
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The invite I want to use for my sister's shower only fits 4 lines. I've seen the longer poem but have to shorten it...any ideas???
CantWait2Wed Posted:

Re: Help me finish this cellophane poem please!

Sorry but I have to be honest- It doesn't flow or sound like a poem maybe just put an insert into the envelope and don't print it on the invite, then you can do something that sounds more complete

ef922 Posted:

Re: Help me finish this cellophane poem please!

thanks for being honest...I was trying to find the last line to make it flow, but I'm stuck. I definintely agree that the 3 lines don't go. I could do what you suggested...thanks!

PhyllisNJoe Posted:

Re: Help me finish this cellophane poem please!

A friend of mine just had 'Be a dear, wrap in clear' on her invite. It worked!
mrsq2be Posted:

Re: Help me finish this cellophane poem please!

for everyone to see?

DANAnPATRICK Posted:

Re: Help me finish this cellophane poem please!


Posted by mrsq2be

for everyone to see?



I like this!
MrsTarricone2B Posted:

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Posted by mrsq2be

for everyone to see?



Exactly what I was thinking!

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