It came out great, the only thing is in the address, i think it would be better if you just wrote Westbury, New York
ali120206
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Re: Help me proofread my invites..
Posted by Espo22
It came out great, the only thing is in the address, i think it would be better if you just wrote Westbury, New York
I would do this as well (and if you really want to leave it in, put a comma after Long Island).
Also, I would take the AND out of the year...
cindyandkevin
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Re: Help me proofread my invites..
Posted by ali120206
Posted by Espo22
It came out great, the only thing is in the address, i think it would be better if you just wrote Westbury, New York
I would do this as well (and if you really want to leave it in, put a comma after Long Island).
Also, I would take the AND out of the year...
I was going to say the same thing.
But otherwise it's very nice!!
happygirl07
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Re: Help me proofread my invites..
Posted by ali120206
Posted by Espo22
It came out great, the only thing is in the address, i think it would be better if you just wrote Westbury, New York
I would do this as well (and if you really want to leave it in, put a comma after Long Island).
Also, I would take the AND out of the year...
Ditto. Otherwise, very nice.
JCam695
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Re: Help me proofread my invites..
I think you can just say 'Reception to follow'
Also, to be formal about the parents names it should be 'Mr. and Mrs. Father's First Name Father's Last Name' instead of saying the woman's first name.
