Help me proofread my program???? (pics added)

mims107 Posted: Sep 21, 2004 09:39 PM

Help me proofread my program???? (pics added)

You have to imagine its a trifold... Also, I am not sure what to put in the 'thank you' area.

Any ideas on the wording, etc??

mims107 Posted: Sep 21, 2004 09:52 PM

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pics now

julz33 Posted: Sep 21, 2004 09:54 PM

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Very nice!

Where you have your names on the front I would make 'and' on its own line.

DebMaher Posted: Sep 21, 2004 09:58 PM

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I LOVE the irish blessing and the gubran quote. Nice.

mims107 Posted: Sep 21, 2004 10:03 PM

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Posted by DebMaher

I LOVE the irish blessing and the gubran quote. Nice.

Thanks, they are my two readings, I thought I would include them.

Any ideas for a quick 'thank you' note to our friends and family on the back?

thiadora Posted: Sep 21, 2004 10:03 PM

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First, let me tell you that you did a wonderful job on your program. It's beautiful and I feel that you made something that fits you and your FH as a couple. I love that you incorporated your Irish heritage into it.

Now for the proof reading comments---

In the ceremony section:
The two readings- in one the 'r' in 'read by' is capitalized, in the other it is lower case. I think that it should look the same in both places.

Also, in the portion where you state the wedding party. It looks strange to me that you used their titles 'Mr., Mrs., etc. . .' because when you refer to the other participants you do not use that format. (the parent, musician, etc.) You should do it the same way on the whole page.

thiadora Posted: Sep 21, 2004 10:03 PM

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Posted by julz33

Very nice!

Where you have your names on the front I would make 'and' on its own line.

I agree.

mims107 Posted: Sep 21, 2004 10:04 PM

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THANKS! I never pick up on those things, I will work on it.

thiadora Posted: Sep 21, 2004 10:06 PM

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Posted by mims107

THANKS! I never pick up on those things, I will work on it.

That's why we're hear No matter how hard I try, I always miss something when I have been staring long and hard at something. Another pair of eyes always helps.