HELP ME WITH THIS PROOF..

xxpazzaxx Posted: Nov 25, 2009 04:03 PM

HELP ME WITH THIS PROOF..

for a bridal shower invite....

should it be...

Given with love by her mother, (comma) on Saturday, March 27th at noon

or

Given with love by her mother on Saturday, March 27th at noon?

pipermaru Posted: Nov 25, 2009 04:04 PM

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i like the 2nd way better

springsandra Posted: Nov 25, 2009 04:05 PM

Re: HELP ME WITH THIS PROOF..

Posted by xxpazzaxx

for a bridal shower invite....

should it be...

Given with love by her mother, (comma) on Saturday, March 27th at noon

or

Given with love by her mother on Saturday, March 27th at noon?

I would say to do either 'Given with love by her mother, Saturday, March 27, 2010 at noon' or 'Given with love by her mother on Saturday, March 27, 2010 at 12:00 pm' -- but honestly, either way or either way you have it is really fine.

heathery72 Posted: Nov 25, 2009 04:14 PM

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I like the second way better too

Marianne13 Posted: Nov 25, 2009 04:53 PM

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the second one.

es2189 Posted: Nov 25, 2009 06:26 PM

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no comma imo

MongieToBe Posted: Nov 25, 2009 06:27 PM

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no comma

mosh424 Posted: Nov 25, 2009 07:11 PM

Re: HELP ME WITH THIS PROOF..

Posted by springsandra

Posted by xxpazzaxx

for a bridal shower invite....

should it be...

Given with love by her mother, (comma) on Saturday, March 27th at noon

or

Given with love by her mother on Saturday, March 27th at noon?

I would say to do either 'Given with love by her mother, Saturday, March 27, 2010 at noon' or 'Given with love by her mother on Saturday, March 27, 2010 at 12:00 pm' -- but honestly, either way or either way you have it is really fine.

ITA