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Help on Proofing Invite Wording

ssdare Posted:

Help on Proofing Invite Wording

Please looke over my invite wording and let me know if any changes are needed (grammar, spelling, capitalization etc.). Thanks so much.

Mr. and Mrs. John Doe
invite you to share in the joy
of the marriage uniting their daughter
Susie Jane Doe
and
James David Smith
son of Mr. and Mrs. David Smith
on Saturday, the seventh of June
Two thousand and three
at quarter past six o’clock in the evening
Vanderbilt Mansion
Idle Hour Boulevard
Oakdale, New York
Reception immediately following
shelzyp Posted:

Re: Help on Proofing Invite Wording

you don't need to put your last name and FH's last name since your parents are listed.

balilove Posted:

Re: Help on Proofing Invite Wording

I agree you don't need to put your last names if your parents are listed. Also I would put a space between that end of the address and Reception Immediately Following.

MayDay16 Posted:

Re: Help on Proofing Invite Wording

I spelled out our names like you did. That is how they showed it in the invitation book.

Check the spelling on 17th.

Six in the evening

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