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HELP PLEASE

Jamnike Posted:

HELP PLEASE

can you girls check this for me ASAP

Jamnike Posted:

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okay so does this look good?


Objective
______________________________________________________________________________

To enter a role that will allow me to expand my knowledge and ability to continue to help Guests and continue to create Disney Magic.

Education
______________________________________________________________________________

2003-2006 Fredonia State University Fredonia, NY
Bachelor of Arts Degree in Music Business
concentration in Marketing and Promotions

2001-2003 Five Towns College Dix Hills, NY
Music Business Concentration

Summary of Qualifications
______________________________________________________________________________


Walt Disney World College Program Alumni
Walt Disney World Trainer, PhotoPass
Proficient at Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint and Word Processing.
Stong background in Coordinating and Organizing events of various nature
Proven Secretarial knowledge
Knowledge of Box Office Operations and Front of House Management

Employment
______________________________________________________________________________

2006- Present Walt Disney World Resort Orlando, FL
Disney PhotoPass Photographer & Trainer
-Create and Capture Guests special moments and memories in all areas of the Walt Disney World Resort

2005-2006 Reg Lenna Civic Center Jamestown, NY
Intern/Event Planner
-Organized events and assisted Box Office Manager and Front of House Manager
2002-2005 Lane Bryant Bay Shore, NY
Key Holder
-Responsible for correct opening and closing procedures as well as completion of paperwork and scheduling of employees

2000-2003 Maureen T. Liccione Brightwaters, NY
Nanny
-Tutored and cared for two small children


Awards and Accreditations
______________________________________________________________________________

Walt Disney World Trainer
Graduated Cum Laude from SUNY Fredonia, May 2006
Kiwanis Club Award 1995-2001
Member of the 2005 SIFE Team


References
_____________________________________________________________________________

Available Upon Request
Jamnike Posted:

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bump
Mrs. V 2008 Posted:

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sounds good to me..except maybe try to make the objective sound a little more professional.,.i'm not sure 'disney magic' sounds right..

susdoug Posted:

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looks good to me, what position are you applying for?

Jamnike Posted:

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thats the cheese they look for :(

Jamnike Posted:

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Posted by susdoug

looks good to me, what position are you applying for?



a few i need to get out of my department STAT
Mrs. V 2008 Posted:

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Posted by Jamnike

thats the cheese they look for :(



lol oh ok! good luck!
snwb08 Posted:

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you have a typo - stong instead of strong

Jamnike Posted:

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Posted by snwb08

you have a typo - stong instead of strong



yeppers got it thanks i ran it in spell check b4 i sent it ;)
snwb08 Posted:

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Posted by Jamnike

okay so does this look good?


Objective
______________________________________________________________________________

To enter a role that will allow me to expand my knowledge and ability to continue to help Guests and continue to create Disney Magic.

Education
______________________________________________________________________________

2003-2006 Fredonia State University Fredonia, NY
Bachelor of Arts Degree in Music Business
concentration in Marketing and Promotions

2001-2003 Five Towns College Dix Hills, NY
Music Business Concentration

Summary of Qualifications
______________________________________________________________________________


Walt Disney World College Program Alumni
Walt Disney World Trainer, PhotoPass
Proficient at Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint and Word Processing.
Stong background in Coordinating and Organizing events of various nature
Proven Secretarial knowledge
Knowledge of Box Office Operations and Front of House Management

Employment
______________________________________________________________________________

2006- Present Walt Disney World Resort Orlando, FL
Disney PhotoPass Photographer & Trainer
-Create and Capture Guests special moments and memories in all areas of the Walt Disney World Resort

2005-2006 Reg Lenna Civic Center Jamestown, NY
Intern/Event Planner
-Organized events and assisted Box Office Manager and Front of House Manager
2002-2005 Lane Bryant Bay Shore, NY
Key Holder
-Responsible for correct opening and closing procedures as well as completion of paperwork and scheduling of employees

2000-2003 Maureen T. Liccione Brightwaters, NY
Nanny
-Tutored and cared for two small children


Awards and Accreditations
______________________________________________________________________________

Walt Disney World Trainer
Graduated Cum Laude from SUNY Fredonia, May 2006
Kiwanis Club Award 1995-2001
Member of the 2005 SIFE Team


References
_____________________________________________________________________________

Available Upon Request



also, having continue twice in your objective is a little redundant. I would say 'to continue to help guests and create Disney magic'
Jamnike Posted:

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i changed it a bit, the objective that is

missK Posted:

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How about:
To obtain a role that allows me to expand my knowledge and ability to better help Guests while continuing to create and promote Disney Magic.

Jamnike Posted:

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Posted by missK

How about:
To obtain a role that allows me to expand my knowledge and ability to better help Guests while continuing to create and promote Disney Magic.




ooo i like that
missK Posted:

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Posted by Jamnike


Posted by missK

How about:
To obtain a role that allows me to expand my knowledge and ability to better help Guests while continuing to create and promote Disney Magic.




ooo i like that

Saram Posted:

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Posted by missK


Posted by Jamnike


Posted by missK

How about:
To obtain a role that allows me to expand my knowledge and ability to better help Guests while continuing to create and promote Disney Magic.




ooo i like that


yea thats a little better
lovebear7800 Posted:

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i think it sounds good.

LoriBeth2728 Posted:

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I like it but I don't know if
Walt Disney World College Program Alumni
Walt Disney World Trainer, PhotoPass

belongs in qualifications - they seem different than the others, plus you mention them further down.

heh go Disney

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