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help proofread my invite wording

cleokizzy Posted:

help proofread my invite wording

we're doing a scroll invitation and really need your advice with the wording. from my understanding, my name (the bride) should be mentioned FIRST and then followed by the groom. isn't that the case? also, it doesn't sound right that FIs parents' names are mentioned first and then followed by my parents...

so which goes first anyway????

here's whats going to be on the invite:
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We

Groom's 1st name and Bride's 1st name

In thanksgiving to our Lord and with the blessings of

our parents

Mr. [Grooms Father's complete name] & Mrs. [Groom's Mothers complete name]

and

Mr. [Brides Father's complete name] & Mrs. [Bride's Mother's complete name]

Request the honor of your presence

at our wedding

to be solemnized at the [Church]
[insert church address]

on Saturday, the twenty eighth of August
two thousand and ten
at ten o'clock in the morning

OFFICIATING MINISTER
[insert name of minister]

Reception to follow at [reception hall name]
[reception hall address]
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btw, i've attached a photo of our invite (in a different color) so you'll have an idea of what our invitation looks like!

TIA!

EDIT: forgot to add the photo.
AngnShaun Posted:

Re: help proofread my invite wording

yes your name should be first on the invite and your parents should be first...

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