help!! what do you think of this for my std hotel info
We have magent std's but i didnt want to just put them in an envelope with nothing else. so i bought this pretty vellum paper invitation kit at staples and figured i would put hotel information on it and send that out together. i have been so undecided on how to word it, i would love your opinion on what i came up with!
Marie & Ronnie
ms. smith and mr. jones are pleased to announce their wedding on Friday November 11, 2005. Because you are an important part of our lives, we look forward to your presence at our wedding celebration. We have blocked rooms for our guests at the following hotels. Please call the hotel directly to reserve your room before October 14, 2005. Tell the hotel that you are with the smith/jones wedding party and you will receive a discount on the cost of the room!
The Long Island Marriott
101 James Doolittle Boulevard
Uniondale, New York 11558
(516)794-3800
Rate: $129.00 per night
Wingate Inn
821 Stewart Avenue
Garden City, New York 11530
(516)705-9000
Rate: $139.00 per night
We look forward to spending our special day with you!
It will be centered, with our names in a pretty font but that is basically it.... what do you guys think?? should i add or take anything away?? tia!!!
Marie & Ronnie
ms. smith and mr. jones are pleased to announce their wedding on Friday November 11, 2005. Because you are an important part of our lives, we look forward to your presence at our wedding celebration. We have blocked rooms for our guests at the following hotels. Please call the hotel directly to reserve your room before October 14, 2005. Tell the hotel that you are with the smith/jones wedding party and you will receive a discount on the cost of the room!
The Long Island Marriott
101 James Doolittle Boulevard
Uniondale, New York 11558
(516)794-3800
Rate: $129.00 per night
Wingate Inn
821 Stewart Avenue
Garden City, New York 11530
(516)705-9000
Rate: $139.00 per night
We look forward to spending our special day with you!
It will be centered, with our names in a pretty font but that is basically it.... what do you guys think?? should i add or take anything away?? tia!!!
