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Help with a MOH speech
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09'er crashing. I think that if you take out the word dolls it flows fine where it is. Then she has the aliteration of the B's. I think that when she says Barbies everyone will know she means the dolss and it will flow better.
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Posted by Jennmolloy
09'er crashing. I think that if you take out the word dolls it flows fine where it is. Then she has the aliteration of the B's. I think that when she says Barbies everyone will know she means the dolss and it will flow better.
I appreciate the crash
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Re: Help with a MOH speech
Posted by MikeandJess
Posted by Jennmolloy
09'er crashing. I think that if you take out the word dolls it flows fine where it is. Then she has the aliteration of the B's. I think that when she says Barbies everyone will know she means the dolss and it will flow better.
I appreciate the crashWhat about the way I worded it? Does dolls work any better there?
It works better like that. However I still think that it will be easier to say and less wordy with out dolls Just my opion though.
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Re: Help with a MOH speech
Posted by Jennmolloy
Posted by MikeandJess
Posted by Jennmolloy
09'er crashing. I think that if you take out the word dolls it flows fine where it is. Then she has the aliteration of the B's. I think that when she says Barbies everyone will know she means the dolss and it will flow better.
I appreciate the crashWhat about the way I worded it? Does dolls work any better there?
It works better like that. However I still think that it will be easier to say and less wordy with out dolls Just my opion though.
Much appreciated, thanks!
