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HELP with Invite Wording

adelya21 Posted:

HELP with Invite Wording

Please let me know if this sounds correct? I am getting 8x10 scroll invites so they are really big and can fit a lot of writing. Since I am doing online RSVP's (had a prev forum on this) the vendor told me that I dont really need the RSVP cards bec they can fit all that on the scroll and have actually had a few weddings where the couple had rsvp info on the scroll. My ceremony and Reception is at WCC. anyways this is my wording:

Adelya ___
and
Gerard ___
together with their parents
Hanna and Roman ___
and
Lisa and Gerard ___
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
on Sunday, the Fifth of June
Two Thousand and Eleven
at six thirty in the evening
Woodbury Country Club
884 Jericho Turnpike
New York, N.Y.

Black tie attire
Reception to follow

The pleasure of a reply is requested on or before
April 25, 2011 at:
Mywedding.com/____
For questions call Katherina: (516)___-___
M_Berk-Glenn Posted:

Re: HELP with Invite Wording


Hanna and Roman ___

With

Lisa and Gerard ___

invite you to share in the joy of

Adelya ___
&
Gerard ___

exchanging marriage vows

on Sunday, the Fifth of June
Two Thousand and Eleven
at six thirty in the evening

Woodbury Country Club
884 Jericho Turnpike
New York, N.Y.

Black tie Reception following

The pleasure of a reply is requested on or before
April 25, 2011 at:
Website Mywedding.com/____
Call (516)___-___
adelya21 Posted:

Re: HELP with Invite Wording

Thanks but the entire wedding is black tie not just reception


Posted by M_Berk-Glenn


Hanna and Roman ___

With

Lisa and Gerard ___

invite you to share in the joy of

Adelya ___
&
Gerard ___

exchanging marriage vows

on Sunday, the Fifth of June
Two Thousand and Eleven
at six thirty in the evening

Woodbury Country Club
884 Jericho Turnpike
New York, N.Y.

Black tie Reception following

The pleasure of a reply is requested on or before
April 25, 2011 at:
Website Mywedding.com/____
Call (516)___-___

MrsVtoBe Posted:

Re: HELP with Invite Wording

I think it's fine. The only thing I would change is 'black tie attire,' to me tie attire sounds weird together. How about just leaving it as Black tie?

adelya21 Posted:

Re: HELP with Invite Wording

ye I think thats better thanks!


Posted by MrsVtoBe

I think it's fine. The only thing I would change is 'black tie attire,' to me tie attire sounds weird together. How about just leaving it as Black tie?

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