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Help with wording

FutureMrs Posted:

Help with wording

As I have posted before, as a thank you to my parents for all of their help for our wedding, we booked them a four day trip to Sandals in the Bahamas. I am making a basket to give them with all beach stuff and Sandals brochures. I am trying to type something up to give to them so they understand what we gave them but don't know how to put it. Do I just list the vacation package or put it in a touristy way. Help Please

jimmysgrl Posted:

Re: Help with wording

Oh, so wish I could help but I'm brain dead today. BUT I did want to write and say that was extremely thoughtful and wonderful of you to do that for your parents! You may want to try www.verseit.com to get ideas
SomethingBlu Posted:

Re: Help with wording

Maxine is great with wording...FM her: Soon2bMsZ

You're a great daughter!

Suzannebride Posted:

Re: Help with wording

Okay, here's a rough try you can possibly work with:

For all the love, help, and things you do,
We've booked you on a trip for two.
Enjoy the sun, the beach, and the sea,
For you have made us as happy as can be!

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