help with wording

time for rehearsal dinner invitations... we like this poem the best:

Practice makes perfect, It's true what they say.
Please come for a run-through before our big day!
Please meet at XXXXX at xxxx-o'clock on the dot.
Where Kara and Michael will soon tie the knot!
After the practice, when all is said in done, please join us at xxxx xxxx for some food, drinks, and fun!
We hope you can all join us!
Thursday October 12th, 2006


so with that all decided on how can I communicate that the groom's parents are hosting???

at the bottom of the invite

have it say :

RSVP by 6/8/06
Julie and Matt Smith
631-751-0000

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Posted by cjb88

at the bottom of the invite

have it say :

RSVP by 6/8/06
Julie and Matt Smith
631-751-0000

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they said they don't want the responsibility and asked me to be the rsvp

OK, maybe this is corny, but how about:

Practice makes perfect, It's true what they say.
Please come for a run-through before our big day!
Please meet at XXXXX at xxxx-o'clock on the dot.
Where Kara and Michael will soon tie the knot!
After the practice, when all is said in done, please join us at xxxx xxxx for some food, drinks, and fun!
We hope you can all join us!
Thursday October 12th, 2006

Thank you to Mike’s Mom & Dad for hosting the bash
Call me to RSVP and I’ll put your name down in a flash!
Kara 631-555-1212

Or

Thank you to Mike’s Mom & Dad for hosting our party
Call me to RSVP and try not to be tardy!
Kara 631-555-1212

OK, so I'm no Shakespeare....

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Posted by kittythestray

OK, maybe this is corny, but how about:

Practice makes perfect, It's true what they say.
Please come for a run-through before our big day!
Please meet at XXXXX at xxxx-o'clock on the dot.
Where Kara and Michael will soon tie the knot!
After the practice, when all is said in done, please join us at xxxx xxxx for some food, drinks, and fun!
We hope you can all join us!
Thursday October 12th, 2006

Thank you to Mike’s Mom & Dad for hosting the bash
Call me to RSVP and I’ll put your name down in a flash!
Kara 631-555-1212

Or

Thank you to Mike’s Mom & Dad for hosting our party
Call me to RSVP and try not to be tardy!
Kara 631-555-1212

OK, so I'm no Shakespeare....

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YOU'RE BRILLIANT!!!!!!!
thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!

love that wording i added this to my notebook so i can remember it for my rd