HELP with wording
I am making a brochure for oot Guests and in it i wanted to include information about our weekend activities.
After the reception we have booked a VIP party at the local bowling alley for any guests to attend. We have covered the cost of the bowling, but guests need to pay for thier shoes, $4.. I dotn want to be tacky but i really cant pay for another thing!
this is what i have so far, what do you think??
Please Join us for a very special
After Party!
The newlyweds and their bridal party,
Invite you to attend a
VIP
Bowling
Party at
AMF Sayville Lanes
631-567-8900
5660 Sunrise Highway
Sayville, NY 11782
6pm-8pm
If love at first sight really does exist, than Pam and Scott’s love first bloomed at a bowling blitz. Many years later, after we tie the knot, some fun will be had can you beat them or not? To challenge the new groom or the new bride, please come out with us, do not be shy! A game or two of bowling must be played. Please bring only $4 so your bowling shoes can be paid!
do you think that will get the point accross or should i skip the poem and get to the points??
TY!
After the reception we have booked a VIP party at the local bowling alley for any guests to attend. We have covered the cost of the bowling, but guests need to pay for thier shoes, $4.. I dotn want to be tacky but i really cant pay for another thing!
this is what i have so far, what do you think??
Please Join us for a very special
After Party!
The newlyweds and their bridal party,
Invite you to attend a
VIP
Bowling
Party at
AMF Sayville Lanes
631-567-8900
5660 Sunrise Highway
Sayville, NY 11782
6pm-8pm
If love at first sight really does exist, than Pam and Scott’s love first bloomed at a bowling blitz. Many years later, after we tie the knot, some fun will be had can you beat them or not? To challenge the new groom or the new bride, please come out with us, do not be shy! A game or two of bowling must be played. Please bring only $4 so your bowling shoes can be paid!
do you think that will get the point accross or should i skip the poem and get to the points??
TY!
