I like it. I just think it might be too much like an invitation with the 'Your presence is requested' JMO
I agree, it sounds too much like the invite.
kissy27
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I think they are gorgeous!
justshir
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i think i would nix the exclamation mark in the end of 'save the date.' it seems strange to have that mark next to such a formal looking letter.
Thumballina
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it's perfect...
o17range
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With the changes you made, I think they are PERFECT!
Empire State
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they are beautiful!
JimmysBride
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I would definitely take out at least the 'your presence is requested' part. It's too much like an invitation....then people will be looking for a time and location... you just want them to hold the date, not invite them, just yet. It is assumed they are going to be invited.
I would also remove the exclamation mark.
Other than that they are very pretty.
jen110704
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They are beautiful & elegant but, I would take out your presence is required. They sound too formal. Other than that I like them.
randella
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Personally- I think they are a little much for a STD.. they are too similar to a formal wedding invite.
I did custom stationary for mine- and they were still elegant- but a little more fun. IMO, STDs are an opportunity to do something a little more fun and casual- esp if you are going to have a formal invite for the wedding.
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I love them - but I think it depends on the style of your wedding. Are you going for something more 'fun' or more 'sophisticated' for the wedding and reception?- Personally, my taste is towards the sophisticated and elegant, so I love this Save the Date... But I've also seen cute fun ones for less formal weddings . . .
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Honestly it reminds me of an invitation. I think that would make a very beautiful invitation but I would go with something less formal for the STD.