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how do these look??

regy_k Posted:

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I like it. very pretty colors and I like that the fonts are cool.
are u having a trouble with an element on them or something?
FH said it looks very classy
Rosie0613 Posted:

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Very pretty! I love the font and the colors!!

Jna2010 Posted:

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Posted by regy_k

I like it. very pretty colors and I like that the fonts are cool.
are u having a trouble with an element on them or something?
FH said it looks very classy


thanks regy!!
do u think the rsvp is confusing? and it says on or before oct 1st, is that wierd? lol im being paranoid
regy_k Posted:

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Posted by Jna2010

Posted by regy_k

I like it. very pretty colors and I like that the fonts are cool.
are u having a trouble with an element on them or something?
FH said it looks very classy


thanks regy!!
do u think the rsvp is confusing? and it says on or before oct 1st, is that wierd? lol im being paranoid


I think better to change to 'by Oct 1'
ppl may think they have to wait till Oct 1

I'll recheck the wording again now


ETA: gramatically speaking (and I am a foreigner and Geremie is LOL), maybe its supposed to be 'Looking fwd to celebrate(no ING) with you'? or am I being a stoopid, uneducated foreigner?
brittndave Posted:

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Posted by regy_k

Posted by Jna2010

Posted by regy_k

I like it. very pretty colors and I like that the fonts are cool.
are u having a trouble with an element on them or something?
FH said it looks very classy


thanks regy!!
do u think the rsvp is confusing? and it says on or before oct 1st, is that wierd? lol im being paranoid


I think better to change to 'by Oct 1'
ppl may think they have to wait till Oct 1

I'll recheck the wording again now


ETA: gramatically speaking (and I am a foreigner and Geremie is LOL), maybe its supposed to be 'Looking fwd to celebrate(no ING) with you'? or am I being a stoopid, uneducated foreigner?


i agree with BY oct 1

we look forward to celebrating with you is the right way to say it
Jna2010 Posted:

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yeah ill change the date wording... i have no idea about the other stuff though, lol your guess is as good as mine and i was born here thanks bye hahaha


should i maybe indent 'number attending' below 'will be attending' ? since they kinda go together?
brittndave Posted:

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Posted by Jna2010

yeah ill change the date wording... i have no idea about the other stuff though, lol your guess is as good as mine and i was born here thanks bye hahaha


should i maybe indent 'number attending' below 'will be attending' ? since they kinda go together?


i think indenting it will throw off all the spacing since all 3 are lined up on the left
Jna2010 Posted:

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Posted by brittndave

Posted by Jna2010

yeah ill change the date wording... i have no idea about the other stuff though, lol your guess is as good as mine and i was born here thanks bye hahaha


should i maybe indent 'number attending' below 'will be attending' ? since they kinda go together?


i think indenting it will throw off all the spacing since all 3 are lined up on the left


good call, should i mmove the third line down then? or just leave as it?
runnerbride1023 Posted:

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Posted by Jna2010

yeah ill change the date wording... i have no idea about the other stuff though, lol your guess is as good as mine and i was born here thanks bye hahaha


should i maybe indent 'number attending' below 'will be attending' ? since they kinda go together?[/QUOTE


I would leave the on or before Oct 1 part, because if you delete it, the line spacing will be different. Plus I think it sounds good.

For some reason I am having a hard time reading the script, but i think its just b/c of my computer.
cateydee Posted:

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i think they are so pretty i love the fonts. the only thing is that the celebrating continues... and cocktails... are not consistent with the capitalization. think you should capitalize 'look forward to celebrating as well.

brittndave Posted:

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Posted by Jna2010

Posted by brittndave

Posted by Jna2010

yeah ill change the date wording... i have no idea about the other stuff though, lol your guess is as good as mine and i was born here thanks bye hahaha


should i maybe indent 'number attending' below 'will be attending' ? since they kinda go together?


i think indenting it will throw off all the spacing since all 3 are lined up on the left


good call, should i mmove the third line down then? or just leave as it?


i would leave it as it is. if you're not liking something about it tho maybe you could move the line to before the words so they would all be the same

______ Number Attending
joctorre Posted:

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I think either indent the Number Attending, or add a space between the positive response and the negative response... otherwise I think dumb people might get confused and only check off ONE line if they are coming..... (They need to know they go together)

I like 'by Oct 1st' or even just make it 'before Oct 1st' but not 'on or before' bc like I said above, people are dumb... and might even wait until AFTER just because of that 'on'....

Other than those two points, though, they look awesome!!!!!

I love the fonts and colors. beautiful!!!!!!!!!

HTH
grkbarbie Posted:

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i think #1 is perfect

Alyssa79 Posted:

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the red script is a little too hard to read. i honestly have to squint to read it. i'd use a script less 'scripty' or cursive

StaceYums81 Posted:

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looks awsome!!

flibbertigibbet Posted:

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I agree with Alyssa. It's pretty but its semi hard to read. Less scripty would be better.

And as the other girls said... 'By Oct 1st' would be better.
angelscri Posted:

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Looks good

SummerBride10 Posted:

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I like the wording..but I agree with alyssa. its hard to reead. when i first tried to read it i thought it was in greek lol

miamimerger Posted:

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I think it's only hard to read because it looks like you did a print screen in order to save them :). they look great! however, there should be a comma after 'dinner' unless 'dinner and dancing' is supposed to be grouped together.

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