Rainmama
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I wrote this poem for our wish bowl. It's going to be like the picture below. The flowers are pens.
Tell me what you think of this poem. Would you change it? Constructive criticism needed!
Pick a flower
to write your wishes
for years of happiness
to the new Mr. and Mrs!
DebMaher
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Ooh, LOVE the flower pens -- are those in your CP's too?
Bunnymonkey
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very cute...i like it
mcc101
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Love it!!!! Original and catchy!!!
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Rainmama
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Posted by DebMaher
Ooh, LOVE the flower pens -- are those in your CP's too?
The pic isn't the exact one that I am making. My CPs are gerbera daisies so I will most likely make the pens with the same.
They are soooooooo easy to make! Let me know if you want the link to the directions!
tourist
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That's cute!
I think happiness is too long of a word, though. It interrupts the rythm a little.
Maybe try 'joy' instead?
Rainmama
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Posted by tourist
That's cute!
I think happiness is too long of a word, though. It interrupts the rythm a little.
Maybe try 'joy' instead?
AHA! Thanks Heather!
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JacnRob729
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i love it
checka
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I love it!!
AndreaLMT
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Sweet- I Like it
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LadyPrincess
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I Love it... If is may ask, May i use it???
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JenniferLee111204
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I LOVE IT! so cute, and very sweet!! great job!!
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Rainmama
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Posted by LadyPrincess
I Love it... If is may ask, May i use it???![]()
Absolutely! I'm honored!
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Dooodles
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Just love it!
