I think I came up with the 'right' verse. If you can give me your opinions it would be great!!
The end of this year is only the start of a lifetime of sharing the love in our hearts...
The honour of your presence is requested at the wedding of Jennifer Bernadette and Albert John on Saturday, the thirty-first of December Two thousand and five at six-fifteen in the evening Mediterranean Manor 303 East Main Street Patchogue, New York
Reception to follow immediately
Jackie&Justin
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where are the last names?
lisad117
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I really like this but I think I what about changing the 3rd line to start with to instead of? I think it might flow better. Either way its nice.
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Posted by erica1030
where are the last names?
I took them off for posting reasons!! They will be on the real ones!!
JBKempf
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I really like this but I think I what about changing the 3rd line to start with to instead of? I think it might flow better. Either way its nice.
The honour of your presence is requested at the wedding to Jennifer Bernadette and Albert John
Like that???? I don't know if that sounds right?!?
Jackie&Justin
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DUh, I am too silly! Looks great then! LOL
MsKitty1274
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Posted by lisad117
I really like this but I think I what about changing the 3rd line to start with to instead of? I think it might flow better. Either way its nice.
The honour of your presence is requested at the wedding to Jennifer Bernadette and Albert John
Like that???? I don't know if that sounds right?!?
I think she meant...
THIS 'of'...
The end of this year is only the start of a lifetime of sharing the love in our hearts...
I think it would look better moving the 'of' to the previous line, like...
The end of this year is only the start of a lifetime of sharing the love in our hearts...
Or change it to 'to'
Leave the 'of' in the latter part (that you changed to 'to') as 'of'. Otherwise, looks/sounds good.
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Posted by lisad117
I really like this but I think I what about changing the 3rd line to start with to instead of? I think it might flow better. Either way its nice.
The honour of your presence is requested at the wedding to Jennifer Bernadette and Albert John
Like that???? I don't know if that sounds right?!?
I think she meant in the first paragraph...'TO a lifetime...'
