Because you have shared in their lives By your friendship and love Mr. & Mrs. XXXXXXX request the honour of your presence at the marriage of their daughter Kristen Ashley XXX to Arthur William XXX son of Mr. & Mrs. XXXX
Friday, the tenth of June two thousand eleven at half past three in the afternoon St. Patricks Church 9 North Clinton Avenue Bay Shore, new york
Dinner and Dancing to follow At seven in the evening The Estate at East Wind 5720 Route 25A Wading River, new york
leesah85
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i did something very similar on mine, but didn't include the reception info on the body of the main invite - i did a separate reception card.
Ellynrose
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I like it - however, I think I'd put the reception info on a seperate card
spdy540
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Posted by Ellynrose
I like it - however, I think I'd put the reception info on a seperate card
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LoveyDovey
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I like it!
and I dont think you necessarily have to put reception info on a separate card
and youre getting married at St. Patricks?? Since I was a little girl I always wanted to get married there!!! I am however not getting married in a church lol
I wanna come seeeeee!!!
MrsKon1111
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omg we r using the same things on our invitations
Love it!
kedra5
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Posted by Ellynrose
I like it - however, I think I'd put the reception info on a seperate card
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kfizz
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Posted by LoveyDovey
I like it!
and I dont think you necessarily have to put reception info on a separate card
and youre getting married at St. Patricks?? Since I was a little girl I always wanted to get married there!!! I am however not getting married in a church lol
I wanna come seeeeee!!!
yess!! St. patricks in bay shore...come!!!!
LoveyDovey
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o m g I will be there! I work right down the block!
rosatemp
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Posted by Ellynrose
I like it - however, I think I'd put the reception info on a seperate card
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FutureJOC
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I like it - however, I think I'd put the reception info on a seperate card
agreed.
HSsweethearts
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is 'by your friendship and love' the correct idiom?
It doesn't sound right
'with your friendship and love' maybe?
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Posted by kfizz
for my invitation wording....
Because you have shared in their lives By your friendship and love Mr. & Mrs. XXXXXXX request the honour of your presence at the marriage of their daughter Kristen Ashley XXX to Arthur William XXX son of Mr. & Mrs. XXXX
Friday, the tenth of June two thousand eleven at half past three in the afternoon St. Patricks Church 9 North Clinton Avenue Bay Shore, new york
Dinner and Dancing to follow At seven in the evening The Estate at East Wind 5720 Route 25A Wading River, new york
I like it! One thing personal preference tho...the church is called 'The Parish of St. Patrick's' I've seen it both ways tho. Totally up to you. I'm doing the parish but I know another bride getting married there thats doing the church.
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Posted by LoveyDovey
o m g I will be there! I work right down the block!
I used to work right there too. I was in the Hemotology Oncology building on the South side of Main Street.
