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How dose this sound

bridget&jimmy Posted:

How dose this sound

How dose this letter sound, we are including this in with our save the dates, could you think of a better way to word this. Or should I just leave it alone.


We just wanted to include a little information about the new
Inn at East Wind for some guests who would be interested in staying the night at the Inn.

Rooms Rates are $206 for the Saturday night of the wedding; this rate includes a 10% discount for all guests affiliated with our wedding. If you decide to book the rooms just mention that you are with the (our last names) wedding and they will automatically discount the rate. You will be allowed to check in to your rooms before the wedding on a first come first serve basis, since normal check in is at 4:00pm.

The Inn also has various other packages available if you would like to make a Weekend out of it. They also have a recently completed day spa, cocktail lounge, and restaurant. For more information about the Inn you could check out there website at www.theinnateastwind.com or you can call 631.929.3500.

Love,
Bridget and Jimmy
Bunnymonkey Posted:

Re: How dose this sound

i think it sounds great - informative, simple and clear.

prindia Posted:

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Sounds great!

CaCRmr Posted:

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You might not need the 10% part in there but that's JMO. Other than that it sounds great.

bridget&jimmy Posted:

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I put that so they would know they get a discount if they mention the wedding, how else should I word it?

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