How is this poem?

I mentioned before how I want to do something special for the mother's at the wedding since we are getting married the day before mother's day. I am going to place a rose at each setting where a mother is going to be sitting and I wanted to attach a little message to it.

What do you girls think of this one?


What is a Mother? She's someone who shares
In all of your problems, your joys, your cares.
Someone who gives you right from the start
The warmth and the love of her motherly heart
Someone who's loyal and helpful and dear
And seems to grow more so as year follows year
Life is much brighter and happier, too
Because there are Mothers - Mothers like you