I am TRYING to become creative!

Ronnie&Theresa Thread views: 377

I am TRYING to become creative!

I am copying a pasting a pieces of things..

how is this?
For My Bridesmaid Michelle

In life there are old friends
and those who are new,
when choosing a bridesmaid
it had to be you.
From the moment we met
you've been the friend,
always close by
with a shoulder to lend.

So I thank you for all
your help and concern,
conversation filled days,
and all that I've learned.

Without you I don't know
what I would have done,
certainly not had
near as much fun.

In life there are old friends
and those who are new,
but none like the true friend
I've found in you.

Even though we don’t speak everyday
and I don’t see you as often as I would like
I would be honored if you would stand by me on a winter day
when my love is sworn to Ronnie.

Love you always, Theresa

NovemberSue Thread views: 377

Re: I am TRYING to become creative!

Very nice!!

Nanjoe Thread views: 377

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That is beautiful Theresa!!! She will love it!!

babybride Thread views: 377

Re: I am TRYING to become creative!

Beautiful!

Ronnie&Theresa Thread views: 377

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You girls are GREAT!!

Thanks for being so supportive!!!

Betty Thread views: 377

Re: I am TRYING to become creative!

Beautiful!!!!

nrvbrd Thread views: 377

Re: I am TRYING to become creative!

This is so lovely. You must use it!!!

Marcela1654 Thread views: 377

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That's soo nice Theresa! She'll love it!!

dubliner Thread views: 377

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thats really nice

Are you a poet too? LizLen is great at these things

Ronnie&Theresa Thread views: 377

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No way..

I am just a copy and paste Girl at heart!!!!!

Thanks!!!

WithThisRing Thread views: 377

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i think that is so pretty. i love it.

bethsiar Thread views: 377

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beautiful! I wish I was that clever!

ss2002 Thread views: 377

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Hi Theresa, you're trying and you're succeeding! I think your BM poem is great. I'd be very touched if I received something like that!

Good job

Sassy Thread views: 377

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Very nice Theresa <>

Ronnie&Theresa Thread views: 377

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I am taking a bow..

<<< bow>>>>>>>

missmmpr Thread views: 377

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i think it is nice, but the third paragraph sounds awkward. I do not think it flows. Just my opinion.

I also think the first paragraph should be split into two paragraphs. From the moment... should be a new paragraph. I see you put a period at the sentence before, so maybe you forgot to skip a line.

eroxgirl Thread views: 377

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thats a whole lot more creative that how I asked my BMs.... it was more like

Me: Hi! I got engaged!

BM: thats great, who's in your BP?

Me: You, this one, that one and the other one.

BM: oh, okay.

Edited to say: Your poem is really sweet - original or not, its very thoughtful!