I could use a little help if you could spare some (UPDATED)

Thank you all soooooo much for your help!!! I loved every poem suggested! You are all so talented!

I went with a mixture of my own words and some from NikkiR and Meara! Below is a picture of what I ended up with...



If you are good at poetry, I could really us your help!

BACKGROUND: I am trying to get my guests to give me their addresses when they signed in because about 70% of them are moving the week before the wedding (military) and I would like to have their address for thank yous. So I pinning cards with each guest's name to a board and I would like them to write their address on the back.

This is my sign... I am HORRBILE at poetry, so it doesn't rythme and doesn't have rythmn... Please help me out.. I'm poerty challenged!

We are so glad you are here
to share our special day
but we need your address
to send good wishes your way

Take your paper from this board
and write it nice and neat
Then go inside and have a great time
and make our special day complete!

ughhh idk im off today

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Posted by ddnsp618

We are so glad you are here
to share our special day
but we need your address
to send good wishes your way

Take your paper from this board
and write it nice and neat
Then go inside and have a great time
and make our special day complete!

ughhh idk im off today

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Thats great Daniellle!

Thank you for joining us on this day,
We are extremely grateful in every way.

We would like to send a thank you to your home,
Even though your profession may cause you to roam.

Please write your adresses on your own card,
and then come inside and party hard!


Okay the last two lines are super lame, I know!!!!

you ugys are good!

To our friends all on the move
Before you start to shake and groove
A quick favor that will not be hard
Just add your address to this card

We always want to stay in touch
Because to us you mean so much
So even after your moving day
Our thanks can quickly come your way

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Posted by meara

To our friends all on the move
Before you start to shake and groove
A quick favor that will not be hard
Just add your address to this card

We always want to stay in touch
Because to us you mean so much
So even after your moving day
Our thanks can quickly come your way

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Ooooh I like this one a lot!!!

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Posted by meara

To our friends all on the move
Before you start to shake and groove
A quick favor that will not be hard
Just add your address to this card

We always want to stay in touch
Because to us you mean so much
So even after your moving day
Our thanks can quickly come your way

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Great job!!!!!

hey whitney!
okay, i tried to keep it with the same sentiment, but changed it a little. idk! my best effort after a long day!
...

Your presence on this day in June
Means so very much.
And though you might have moved away,
We want to keep in touch.

We all have places to which we roam
And we hold you all so dear,
Where ever you call your house a home
Please write your address here.


maybe i'll try again tomorrow after a good night's sleep?

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Posted by meara

To our friends all on the move
Before you start to shake and groove
A quick favor that will not be hard
Just add your address to this card

We always want to stay in touch
Because to us you mean so much
So even after your moving day
Our thanks can quickly come your way

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nice job!

all you ladies are good! omg, i s uck!

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Posted by MrsJuneB2B

hey whitney!
okay, i tried to keep it with the same sentiment, but changed it a little. idk! my best effort after a long day!
...

Your presence on this day in June
Means so very much.
And though you might have moved away,
We want to keep in touch.

We all have places to which we roam
And we hold you all so dear,
Where ever you call your house a home
Please write your address here.


maybe i'll try again tomorrow after a good night's sleep?

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Thats great too!! I didnt know we had so many great poets non this board!

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Posted by MrsJuneB2B

hey whitney!
okay, i tried to keep it with the same sentiment, but changed it a little. idk! my best effort after a long day!
...

Your presence on this day in June
Means so very much.
And though you might have moved away,
We want to keep in touch.

We all have places to which we roam
And we hold you all so dear,
Where ever you call your house a home
Please write your address here.


maybe i'll try again tomorrow after a good night's sleep?

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I think yours is great!

thanks :o)

all you girls are so talented!! i love poetry...i'm better at reading it than writing it! lol

wow, they are all so good....maybe you should use all of them! Give them a variety!!

Sounds good, the only thing I would say is take out the 'A' in the third paragraph down.