I need a fresh set of eyes!!!!! Help Proof my Invite wording please

Because you have shared in our lives
By your friendship and love, we

XXXXXXXXXXXXX
and
XXXXXXXXXXXXX

together with our parents
invite you to share
the beginning of our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows
on Saturday, the seventh of November
two thousand nine
at two thirty in the afternoon
St. Edward Confessor Church
205 Jackson Avenue
Syosset, New York
**clearly this isn't the format, font, size, style or anything. Just the wording. TIA!!**

sounds god to me!!!

the only thing i might change is the second line..maybe change 'by' to 'with'

just a thought..sounds good either way

It should say:

Half after two o'clock

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Posted by soon2bMrs P

Because you have shared in our lives
WITH your friendship and love, we

XXXXXXXXXXXXX
and
XXXXXXXXXXXXX

together with our parents
invite you to share
the beginning of our new life together
AS we exchange marriage vows
on Saturday, the seventh of November
two thousand nine
at HALF PAST TWO in the afternoon
St. Edward Confessor Church
205 Jackson Avenue
Syosset, New York
**clearly this isn't the format, font, size, style or anything. Just the wording. TIA!!**

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I made my changes in caps!

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Posted by Juhgail

It should say:

Half after two o'clock

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This is where I made the mistake on mine. Oh well, I dont think anyone noticed.

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Posted by KittyGags

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Posted by soon2bMrs P

Because you have shared in our lives
WITH your friendship and love, we

XXXXXXXXXXXXX
and
XXXXXXXXXXXXX

together with our parents
invite you to share
the beginning of our new life together
AS we exchange marriage vows
on Saturday, the seventh of November
two thousand nine
at HALF PAST TWO in the afternoon
St. Edward Confessor Church
205 Jackson Avenue
Syosset, New York
**clearly this isn't the format, font, size, style or anything. Just the wording. TIA!!**

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I made my changes in caps!

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Thanks, great catches!