I need some help making this saying sound better! Please look and be creative!

Hang this Horseshoe in
your house for good luck.
The open end should
always point up so the
good luck won’t spill out!

Why don't you just take out the last part? So it says:

Hang this Horseshoe in
your house for good luck.
The open end should
always point up!

ETA: Sorry not so creative!

sorry im not creative either but here goes:

hang this horeshoe
for good luck
the open end should always face up
to insure that your good luck
never runs out !( spills out / falls out)

Hey that ones not so bad...

I really dont want to take the last part out-thats the best part, I think!

Well, keep them coming!!!

Hang this horseshoe
For good luck
With the open end
Always pointing up
Then you will never doubt
That the good luck won't spill out!

Hang this horseshoe
for years of good luck.
The open end
should always point up.

To keep the luck
from spilling down
Be sure to never
Turn it around.



LOL...I'm trying!!

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Posted by Rainmama

Hang this horseshoe
for years of good luck.
The open end
should always point up.

To keep the luck
from spilling down
Be sure to never
Turn it around.



LOL...I'm trying!!

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that one is sooo good!!

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Posted by Soon2bMsZ

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Posted by Rainmama

Hang this horseshoe
for years of good luck.
The open end
should always point up.

To keep the luck
from spilling down
Be sure to never
Turn it around.



LOL...I'm trying!!

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that one is sooo good!!

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awww thanks!

This is silly, but (hopefully) funny too!

Good luck will abound with this horseshoe around,
find it a good place in your home.
Point the open end up so the luck won’t spill out.
(Please don’t mind this real cheesy poem.)

ETA: I like Rainmama's better!

You girls are great! and making me laugh!!!

You want to laugh?
Here's the one that kept popping in my head earlier:

Hang this horseshoe
for a lifetime of luck.
The open end
should always be up.

But if your luck
should ever spill
Never fear
You're in our will.



I kill me

Thats great! You kill me too!!!! I dont think they woudl like me thoguh if I put that on my favors!!!!