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I need you ladies to proof my menus pretty please!!!

LuvMyAlfonse Posted:

I need you ladies to proof my menus pretty please!!!

I can't post it - it's in MS Word. Can you proof my spelling and grammar and whatnot? Thanks!!!!

First Course
Caesar salad
Crisp romaine lettuce tossed with Caesar dressing served with mesquite grilled chicken breast and Parmesan cheese

Second Course
Gourmet Ravioli Trio
Lobster ravioli, spinach ravioli, and sun-dried tomato ravioli nestled in a pomodoro sauce

Main Course
Herb Roasted Chicken
With cheese-filled rigatoni, smoked tomato sauce and asparagus
-or-
Shrimp and Lobster Crepe
Succulent lobster and shrimp crepe with asparagus served on a bed of sautéed spinach with a sherry curry sauce
-or-
Filet Mignon
Served with herb au jus, salt and pepper, bleu cheese potato croquette and mixed vegetables
-or-
Vegetarian Lasagna
Served with plum tomato sauce

Dessert
Wedding cake
Fondant icing, yellow cake with vanilla pudding filling

Viennese Dessert Cafe


Maria31 Posted:

Re: I need you ladies to proof my menus pretty please!!!

No need to cap 'Parmesan'. Also, above the main course maybe you should put 'Your choice of one' instead of writing 'or' after every choice.

Other than that, it looks great! ...and sounds DELISH!!
LuvMyAlfonse Posted:

Re: I need you ladies to proof my menus pretty please!!!


Posted by Maria31

No need to cap 'Parmesan'. Also, above the main course maybe you should put 'Your choice of one' instead of writing 'or' after every choice.

Other than that, it looks great! ...and sounds DELISH!!



Hmmm - I'll try that out! Thanks for the suggestion!!!
missliss Posted:

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Jenn it looks great. And if you could wrap up the ravioli trio for me I'll love you forever!!!!!
LuvMyAlfonse Posted:

Re: I need you ladies to proof my menus pretty please!!!


Posted by missliss

Jenn it looks great. And if you could wrap up the ravioli trio for me I'll love you forever!!!!!



done and done!
NapaValleyGirl Posted:

Re: I need you ladies to proof my menus pretty please!!!

Jenn, Wow, that ravioli sounds amazing.

I'm wondering whether or not you need all the 'or'....
davenjess Posted:

Re: I need you ladies to proof my menus pretty please!!!

at a real quick glance, there are some commas missing...i'll edit in a sec - just wanted to let you know. (used to be a proofreader)

Summertimegal424 Posted:

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wow sounds soo good!

everything looks great!
LuvMyAlfonse Posted:

Re: I need you ladies to proof my menus pretty please!!!


Posted by davenjess

at a real quick glance, there are some commas missing...i'll edit in a sec - just wanted to let you know. (used to be a proofreader)





I've already printed 56.

It's on cardstock so I keep giving my printer a break.

Can I email it to you Jess in it's entirety with all the pretty fonts?
LuvMyAlfonse Posted:

Re: I need you ladies to proof my menus pretty please!!!


Posted by NapaValleyGirl

Jenn, Wow, that ravioli sounds amazing.

I'm wondering whether or not you need all the 'or'....



I dropped the 'or' - I changed it to the 'Your choice of one'
LuvMyAlfonse Posted:

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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

I'm an asss clown.

My flourish was off-center so I have to reprint anyway.

Oh man - I'm so spent. I learned my lesson with mistakes on proofing and whatnot - so I post it for you girls and because I can't post the whole thing - I screw it up. Ooooooooooooooooh! What a waste of cardstock and ink. I'm so mad, so mad!
davenjess Posted:

Re: I need you ladies to proof my menus pretty please!!!

First Course
Caesar Salad (cap the S - if you are doing that with all titles of courses, which you seem to be)
Crisp romaine lettuce tossed with Caesar dressing, (INSERT COMMA) served with mesquite grilled chicken breast and Parmesan cheese

Second Course
Gourmet Ravioli Trio
Lobster ravioli, spinach ravioli, and sun-dried tomato ravioli nestled in a pomodoro sauce

Main Course
Herb Roasted Chicken, with (add comma, lower case w) cheese-filled rigatoni, smoked tomato sauce and asparagus
-or-
Shrimp and Lobster Crepe
Succulent lobster and shrimp crepe with asparagus served on a bed of sautéed spinach with a sherry curry sauce
-or-
Filet Mignon
Served with herb au jus, salt and pepper, bleu cheese potato croquette and mixed vegetables
-or-
Vegetarian Lasagna
Served with plum tomato sauce

Dessert
Wedding cake
Fondant icing, yellow cake with vanilla pudding filling (i don't think you need to describe the cake, wedding cake is enough - just my 2 cents)

Viennese Dessert Cafe
davenjess Posted:

Re: I need you ladies to proof my menus pretty please!!!


Posted by LuvMyAlfonse


Posted by davenjess

at a real quick glance, there are some commas missing...i'll edit in a sec - just wanted to let you know. (used to be a proofreader)





I've already printed 56.

It's on cardstock so I keep giving my printer a break.

Can I email it to you Jess in it's entirety with all the pretty fonts?



you're about to have an FM
sophisticat13 Posted:

Re: I need you ladies to proof my menus pretty please!!!

It looks great-no errors! I agree w/the other brides about repeating the 'or.'
We picked the gourmet ravioli trio too!!

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